I got a paper back from a professor today who said she gave me a B+ because my paragraphs were too long and my paper was...and I quote "too heavy" to have such long paragraphs that aggravated her ADD. So I guess I'll chop it up into 8 sentence long pre-digested word bits. Then she'll like it. ::throws hands up in air:: SOME PEOPLE I DO NOT UNDERSTAND...IF YOU DON'T HAVE THE ATTENTION SPAN TO READ MORE THAN 8 SENTENCES....WHY...ARE YOU AN ENGLISH PROF.? Whatever. Chop up. Regrade.
paperdress:
Whenever we had to do papers in HS mine were always way too long--even if I spent half the hour trying to shorten them. I'd like to read your paper..