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Writer's Workshop Prompt: Sit still in a quiet room for ten minutes and pretend that you are photographing your sensory perceptions. Caption them.


this is 3:14 am. this is prepared. this is my lap. this is computer, thesaurus, notebook, 4 pencils and a lighter. this is me and blank pages. that is quiet boy is blank noises. this is big ideas and subtlety and blatant...
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burstandbloom:
you wrote 2 stories
?

did i miss one
?

i posted mine with the Cursive lyric
and gave you feedback on yours

i wish you had told me you had put yours up
i almost read it
but i forced myself not to
until i wrote mine

My borther bought me a book called Writer's Block
a couple years ago
it is a small book shaped like a block with ideas in it
check out the link
smuffy:
meh. i'm ok. you know how it is. i'm getting the cold shoulder again. but i'm leaving in one day for two weeks so hopefully going away will make me feel better. oh and you know how i told you my ex was on good terms with me? well that all changed. he sent me a very nasty email cursing me the fuck out again. surreal i'll try to drop by before i go...love ya! kiss
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burstandbloom:
what exactly do i owe you for that citique
?

i think this is the piece that interests me the most out of the ones ive written - although the second story i wrote i liked a lot, it was small though and i dont remember anybody giving me any feedback, fuckers -

so i think i will be revising the latest one and trying to get it good enough to publish

we will see

what do you think of the CURSIVE song
?
burstandbloom:
"don't want to be seen as a pretty thing
'Cause it's the pretty things that we're always breaking..."

good pick
ill write something too

but probably not tonight

i have to finish writing this article about the New Orleans Hornets for this magazine im working for
i need to hook it up fat
so i can get some free season tickets and get in with the Hornets
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odette:
oh i changed my email and there was a typo.... long story short: please send again? kiss

they better watch it!!!
odette:
nuttin. just me an the boy at the house alone. were gonna watch cartoons proly. what are you doin?
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Before I force more of my writing down your throats....everytime I post a new page, someone thanks me for sharing about my childhood. It's completely fictionalized. And....cue eyes glazing over.........

NOW.

Page 108 for that ass:
[In the summer of 1989, we moved into my mother's childhood home.]

The wood flesh of 702 Shannon Way bore mute scars, silently taunting Emelia and I with the...
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scopitone6248:
BWAAAHAHAHHAHAHAA!!!!

YES!

RESULT!!
pb:
my god(dess) that just amazing. i'm beginning to learn it takes more than just an instinctual way with words to write something that good. much respect and admiration to you, dear. don't be discouraged, you could be me.



-pb mad
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maurauder:
I was reading Newsweek last night and I came accross a word I didn't know. Of course I thought of you.

picayune (P)Pronunciation Key(pk-yn)
adj.

1. Of little value or importance; paltry. See Synonyms at trivial.
2. Petty; mean.


It's a good one, no?
moralitydies:
wow.


just wow. eeek
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thedishwasher:
i love ya girlie! i got your postcard today, you best believe rach and i are gonna visit, im sooo looking forward to it! kiss kiss
erica:
I am moving back to Toronto. I can't wait! I get to be around family and not pay rent for a while. It'll be fun.

love
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Inspired by Respect

From this place of fantasy, of unreality and delusion, a mind- as alive as my own, has birthed itself into a tangible form. A man has come from an identity sheathed in facade and hidden by alias.

The name you know him by is not the name that his chocolate-skinned mother, in her leopard skin pants, called out the window to bring...
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pb:
wow.

so, SG has sort of turned out well for you then?

i remember the first day you dropped by my journal. you were kinda iffy about the whole thing...

send me the info on that paypal account whateverthing.



-pb mad
pb:
email.
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dizzy:
I just logged onto Aim, but you're nowhere to be found...
dizzy:
The weekend was fine. I fucked myself up sat night, so i had to kick her out sunday morning.
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aerosol leaves for Iraq in a matter of hours. If you don't know him, he is one of the most talented, gentle, selfless, genuine people I know. Please thank him for his sacrifice. He's making it for you and for me and for this.

I'll miss you, Christopher. Please write me often, I will keep my promise to you...expect sugar cookies.

Thank you. Good luck....
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chris_sick:
jesus, that's heavy. be nice if once in a great while i wasn't so caught up in myself i could do nice things for people i care about like you do. yeah.

sorry about your friend, that's tragic, but that doesn't mean everyone who has ever done acid is an asshole or you should automatically hate them. least of all me, since we're pals. and be nicer to dankrubis, he's a big gun(a great writer) and a very nice, smart guy.

if you talk to him before i do, tell christopher he was on my mind all weekend and i'm wishing him the best.
creative_slacker:
I hate W. Bush. Fucker.
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Please no one be offended but if I don't know you personally, as in know your real name and something about you, I am removing you from my friends list. It doesn't mean I don't like you or that I don't want to talk to you. But, my name is not delusion and this is not real life.
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aerosolinvasion:
they made me go to a strip club tonight.

holy god, i am so drunk righ tnow.
please forgve me for my sins.
oh well.

i suppose i shoudl enjoy it.
i seriosly considered flying you up to send me off. if you want, don;t doubt that i will.
aerosolinvasion:
you are now officially, the best person ever.
thanks for being there.
patronize - 3. to treat in a condescending manner.

you didn't do so after all. talk to you tomorow

kiss kiss kiss