i edited the poem ...i think its much better now
::+:: Slept so long ::+::
Seized hell....alive in its desires!
lust smiles in such sensuous curves
burn my lips, the taste of yours
singed your smile, upon the heart
erotic scent, trails to my desires
Beauty so vivid, those hazel eyes
sadness slowly shading green
slept so long, beside you
Lead my eyes, enticed by you
to fill this void without you
senses etched with essence of you
scent leading eyes to behold
A million dreams I'd trade
to taste heaven, in locked lips
for far too long I've slept
hate I do, continuing in this sleep
I've slept so long....waiting to touch you
I've slept so long....desiring you
I've slept so long without you....
::+:: Slept so long ::+::
Seized hell....alive in its desires!
lust smiles in such sensuous curves
burn my lips, the taste of yours
singed your smile, upon the heart
erotic scent, trails to my desires
Beauty so vivid, those hazel eyes
sadness slowly shading green
slept so long, beside you
Lead my eyes, enticed by you
to fill this void without you
senses etched with essence of you
scent leading eyes to behold
A million dreams I'd trade
to taste heaven, in locked lips
for far too long I've slept
hate I do, continuing in this sleep
I've slept so long....waiting to touch you
I've slept so long....desiring you
I've slept so long without you....