Ashes of Darkness
The wretched caw of the fading phoenix,
Harkens through the haze of feelings,
Incessant, ceaseless, senseless bleatings,
For the final time, the minds are meeting,
The ghost of sanity retreating,
The glint of steel, is oh so greeting,
Like a visitor, entreating,
The ominous raven, repeating,
A final cry before the cycled fix
The wretched caw of the fading phoenix,
Harkens through the haze of feelings,
Incessant, ceaseless, senseless bleatings,
For the final time, the minds are meeting,
The ghost of sanity retreating,
The glint of steel, is oh so greeting,
Like a visitor, entreating,
The ominous raven, repeating,
A final cry before the cycled fix
jackwolfe:
It sounds very frustrated, but I like the elements you've used.