Lynn,
At some point yesterday, your essay really came together. I love it when I'm
so frustrated over some writing that just won't come together, and then all of
a sudden it just begins to flow. Anyway, this is great, and the only minor
suggestion I have is that, on your first page, you've referred to the guy as
"they" instead of using him/his/he.
This is one of the best definitions I've seen in a long time.
And hey, don't forget about the literacy narrative handout I gave you. It was
worth 20% of your grade, so you won't be able to get higher than a C if you
don't turn one in, and that grade would be a terrible reflection of your
superior writing skill. As long as I receive it by next Tuesday, it will be
no problem.
Anything bad that happened this week, totally doesn't matter because this is something that makes me feel better about my aspiring to be a writer.
Oh, and how about I was watching Fox News today, and they had the big headline that said "WHAT HAPPENED" and then changed it to "WHAT HAPPANED" and about 30 seconds later changed it back to "WHAT HAPPENED". I laughed so hard it was fucking ridiculous. 
Oh, and I bought soooo many cute new clothes today it's ridiculous (if you can't tell, ridiculous is my fav word). Mebbe pictures of the new outfits.
EVEN BETTER! Buttoned up some pants that haven't fit in a while today, and they look faaabulous!
Maybe I should write down what I eat so that I can keep up with it better.. today: Breakfast - Caesar Salad, Lunch - Orange and Cheese, Dinner - Stir Fry bowl with chicken, rice, broccoli, zucchini, squash, carrots, green peppers, and onions... it was so fucking delicious. I'll be eating a lot more of that kinda stuff since I get it for free at work.
Annnnnnd... here's another beach trip pictures... and a couple I took at the bar
Stephanie (the pretty girl who wins) while we were playing football...
Ashley, Steven, and my ass
Carp, Danny, and Nikki
Me relaxin, drinkin a beer
Me again, what can I say, I'm Vain
This is what I woke up to, I actually took this picture when right after I woke up because I thought it was so pretty. I wish someone had taken a pic because it was so awesome, I just laid a blanket next to the fire, and laid down in my bathing suit and went to sleep. It felt fucking amazing.
Steph putting on my shirt
Foreshadowing.
meeeeee
Life is goooood. 
