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This is a poem my little sister wrote. Shes 13, tell me what you think:


Drowning, my head comes up from the water, but you can't hear me scream. I fade away, slowly but i still cant die. Thats all I want to do, the life I still have is just pain from when you turned your back on me and I fell in. But, you dont care, you're to full with the joy of haveing to tear out my heart and give it to the shark near by. I scream once more, I'm still fadeing, you finaly hear me...but to late. Ive finaly given up. You watch my body float i the water. You realize what you've done. You hope I come back, but my body still floats, lifeless, withering, as the shark slowly comes, you look away...