Chapter 3

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Consciousness dawned on Neeku as she slowly opened her eyes. She wasn’t sure what time it was, but she did feel much better. Her ribs barely felt bruised now, and most of her wounds had healed; she didn’t feel anything bleeding. If only this type of sleep could repair my clothes as well as my body, she chuckled to herself. Although she felt confident that...
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eminerale:
Neeku and Sheeba’s dynamic is just so good 👌 I love your attention to detail and use of the senses. Onion soup and wyvern leather. Great stuff. I hope you can get back to writing soon ✍️ 🙏
sheashannara:
@eminerale I truly appreciate your words!

chapter 2 (I don't name my chapters, never have)

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Myneeku’la tried pulling her arm out of her stepfather’s grip, but it was no use. She was only nine, barely four feet tall, all knees and elbows, and he was a butcher who spent all day chopping up meat that went to the better parts of Tawnytown. “Let me go!” she hissed at him. She knew better than to scream out or call for help;...
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eminerale:
The Eku honorific detail absolutely broke my heart 💔 beautiful writing @sheashannara I’m glad we get to see how Sheeba first came into her life.
sheashannara:
@eminerale thank you so much!!

I finished chapter 2, if anyone's interested in it

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I don't want to keep posting into the void, as it were, so if so let me know! :)

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eminerale:
Please keep posting, your writing is a joy. I’m often late but I will read them. Feel free to tag me and I will realise much faster!
sheashannara:
@eminerale ok sir!

older song, but stil a good one

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