Softer stuff
In music Fermata is to hold a note and not let go, to freeze time. Nicholson Baker, wrote a great book entitled "fermata" ( has another great on called "Vox")
Fermata
for Sarah
She lays softly silent
Seemingly without a care
Quietly content, with bed hair
Her beauty leaves me gasping for air
I watch her chest
As it rises and falls
Just...
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as promised some darker stuff
Tool
He stands with his rifle
Nearly three feet away
Smoking with one hand in his pocket
What kind of Sentry is he
I swoop upon him from behind
With the greatest of easy
In a fluid motion I strike
Timing the insertion into the right side of his neck
Just as I cup his mouth and squeeze shut his...
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figmentation:
greetings and salutations...
creative_slacker:
I like your transitions in the first poem. The tool with the human tool, very nice metaphor. The second poem intrigues me... autobiographical perhapse? (Or am I prying)
Anyhow, dark, broody, pensive, very nice... keep writing.
Anyhow, dark, broody, pensive, very nice... keep writing.
okay some more love stuff, I have some very angry sniper, shoot people from a 1000meters stufbut first this
Thoughts of you
As slow jazz plays on the radio
Sitting reading on the couch
In the candles soft flame
Listening to the gentle rain on the windows edge
When I head to bed
Kissing my pillow good night
And hold it ever so tight
In...
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jayde__:
That was beautiful and touching. 
So how are you doing?
So how are you doing?
nomadgirl:
That was ever so purty.
Okay some more soft and gentle stuff - I promise, I have just written some very very dark stuff and some sniper poetry, but until then
That of an angel
There is no beauty
Like that of an angel
No softness
That compares to her wings
Floating effortlessly
Evil dares not to dwell
Anyplace she goes
Even better, she barley knows
How her touch, heals...
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kesaresj:
You sent my a friend's request. I came to say hi and see who you are. I have really cool glasses.
bluechild:
awww
Abandoned
On a warm summer eve
With perfect weather
My reckless youth was abandoned
Not far from my childhood home
We ate pizza and searched in vain for corndogs
Playing thirty dollars worth of arcade games
Walking miles on the boardwalk
Awkwardly advancing with true romance
Over a decade before I lost my innocence
Twelve thousand miles away
In a unforgiving desert
In a land...
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On a warm summer eve
With perfect weather
My reckless youth was abandoned
Not far from my childhood home
We ate pizza and searched in vain for corndogs
Playing thirty dollars worth of arcade games
Walking miles on the boardwalk
Awkwardly advancing with true romance
Over a decade before I lost my innocence
Twelve thousand miles away
In a unforgiving desert
In a land...
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semicharmed:
hey there !
I've stopped writing for now, i feel as if i have nothing to get out, which is really good in some way ... don't you think ?
and i see as always your writing is beautiful
I've stopped writing for now, i feel as if i have nothing to get out, which is really good in some way ... don't you think ?
and i see as always your writing is beautiful
semicharmed:
The boyfriend is fine.
We're planning on going to Canada for a few weeks - but that's in the far future : )
What's with you ?
Found a hot girl with glasses ?
We're planning on going to Canada for a few weeks - but that's in the far future : )
What's with you ?
Found a hot girl with glasses ?
Okay - some more dark poetry - still looking for a girl with cool glasses, that I can see our unborn children in her eyes, short of that a woman with or without cool glasses to have a great deal of sex with over the long weekend ?
back to the dark draft, also from the upcoming book
Too many to count
Bound by the...
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n8tvegrl:
I nominate you for longest post ever... if not this one then one of your many others!
Hope all is well with you!
Hope all is well with you!
minibeanie:
With all your poetry, when do have time to do anything else....
This is the title poem of the book - you can start to piece them together to get a feel for it
War Cry
We painted our faces,
We cut off our Hair,
We lived like a noble nomad tribe,
We hunted in Packs
We took care of each other
We traveled light
We ate what we could
We called each other Brother
We prayed...
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adelle86561:
another beautiful piece - will i be able to get your book in sydney or anywhere online?
minibeanie:
If everyone could get their feelings out like you do we would all be a little happier.....
today's poem is
I had sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a whole lot of sex ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
first time since jan, 2004 and I made her cum about 15 times over a 12 hour period !!! swear to god !
I love sex ! more poetry later, no we are doing the dance of happy sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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minibeanie:
Congrats....Damn, 15 times huh....Where ya been all my life.....Write me a poem.....
daemontia:
15? i can't believe that lol
okay - I wrote this last night, since it ws sat. night and I had no date
did I mention being single sucks.
Does anyone have a friend with cool glasses that lives in the North East ?
so back to the dark poetry, if you are just jumping in, you may want to go back an look at some of the other stuff in...
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user02840824:
Hey sweetie, thanks for the journal comments! Just wanted to let you know that I FINALLY finished my new journal story. Also uploaded a new profile pic and several folders of webcam shots, most of which have me wearing my glasses... 
Lacey420
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newark:
today's poem is
I had sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a whole lot of sex ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
first time since jan, 2004 and I made her cum about 15 times over a 12 hour period !!! swear to god !
I love sex ! more poetry later, no we are doing the dance of happy sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!
today's poem is
I had sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a whole lot of sex ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
first time since jan, 2004 and I made her cum about 15 times over a 12 hour period !!! swear to god !
I love sex ! more poetry later, no we are doing the dance of happy sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay, since the dark poetry seems to keep people reading, here is some more, yes yes another bad poem
what do you want I sell insurance for a living
Pink Misty Morning
A single crack, from across a sloping meadow
A long full second, after a lumbering free fall that ends with a thump
Silence rules, as dawn arrives from the blackness of night
The...
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phelix:
no. dissapointing I know but the list has been put on hold untill my pesky exams are over then it's all systems go in the 'things to do' department.. can't wait! xxxxx
diggin the poetry 'pulpy pink mist' (fave bit) I have a thing for p words perfect plonk pixie pearl poison ooh write me a poem with lots of p words make me shiver
diggin the poetry 'pulpy pink mist' (fave bit) I have a thing for p words perfect plonk pixie pearl poison ooh write me a poem with lots of p words make me shiver
loungeliz:
I know what you mean about the drill field. I turned that down myself. Your right about that young man's game. I'm killing myself to keep up with these little bastards. You know I hope we were not as bad as these kids today are when we were young devil dawgs. But we both know we were. Oh well, I build bikes as a hobby now. I run a small business here in LA (www.dentrecon.com) now. It's pretty good on the money side and I got to drive these sports cars like I stole em. Not to mention the client data base I have her in LA and the Hollywood hills. But thats an other story for another day brother. I like the poem, got anything else that might ring a bell in the brain housing group.
You dont know a of these names do you?
Todd kennedy- works for eagle industries now
Weaver - from the boat house
Griffey - fucked up on a rough insert jump 91
Verthain - LAPD now
Winn - called him winnie the pussy from combat missions usa network
Gray - bull rider last seen in south america as a, lets just say tour guide
Hanks - Went to 19th SF in ganistan
Kury - still with 1st
Sgt Maj Coffee - retired to the farm i heard
You dont know a of these names do you?
Todd kennedy- works for eagle industries now
Weaver - from the boat house
Griffey - fucked up on a rough insert jump 91
Verthain - LAPD now
Winn - called him winnie the pussy from combat missions usa network
Gray - bull rider last seen in south america as a, lets just say tour guide
Hanks - Went to 19th SF in ganistan
Kury - still with 1st
Sgt Maj Coffee - retired to the farm i heard
And this friend is an old-new friend. Not for so long but we know a lot about each other ...
Want my glasses to model for you ? : )