a horror slash romance short story I'll call With Eyes Closed.
Fae Lilly slid the little plastic card into the doors slot and tried to remove it as quickly as possible. Saying a silent thank you when the green light came on and she could open the door. She stepped inside and imediately turned on the light. She could feel Aaron's body heat behind her as he waited to enter the room so she took a few more steps in.
Well the bed was king sized, thats good, bed spread looked clean and new. Everything in the room looked clean and new, although it all looked cheap, especially the decorating, which reminded her that yes she was in what she would consider a sleazy hotel. But maybe she was just too picky, she always liked nice hotels. She would go on vacations with her Grandparents as a child just to get to stay in a nice place like they would stay. That would still be her idea of a vacation, if she still had time to take them.
She turned and hugged Aaron tight, hiding her face against his chest and squashing the awkward moment that always seemed to come just now when they made it to there little temporary hideaway. They lived about 30 minutes apart. Fae Lilly lived in Spade, the biggest city in Rains county. She worked as a nurse in the hospital there and shared a house with a handful of highschool friends she'd never been able to shake loose of. She didn't see them very often, and didn't mind that fact. They were more like family than friends, she cared, whether she wanted to or not. She had short red hair, a pixie cut that was low maintance, her body was a little too curvy, and her sharp nose kept her from being tradtionally pretty. But she had a friendly way about her, never intimidated anyone, and people generally enjoyed her company, and yes, men noticed her. Aaron had, when he showed up in the ER one night. He had been in a horrible crash but showed up without a scratch on him. It had been her task to take care of him, and he had been a horrible flirt and she had dismissed him as such. But then he came back. And he kept coming back.
Aaron lived out in the county a bit, off a farm road on Highway 69. That's where he had his wreck, out on the highway. When Fae Lilly had met the people he lived with out on his ranch she immediately thought "riff raff" like maybe he had leftovers from school days as well. But it was much different with them. They were friends he had made when he went to visit his family England, a graduation gift, and a birthday gift as well. 18 was a big year for Aaron St. John. They were a close group. She called them his "pack" as if they were a pack of wolves, and she'd come to learn that pretty much, thats what they were.
So all things considered, the no tell hotell was the best place for them to go. When they needed to be alone.
She looked up at him and was star struck as always. He was a beautiful man, and there was something deliciously rock star about him even though he was a soft spoken good ole boy that was born and lived in Texas. He had ice blue eyes, and thick cupids bow lips that any woman would be jealous of. Aaron was build lean and mean like you get from working a ranch and he was a perfect 6 feet tall. He had wavy black hair and a prominate widows peak, giving him a heart shaped face.
She'd know him about a year now, learned about a million of the billion of secrets that made him who he was, and in hotels like this, she had learned to play his body like a fiddle. As they say. So it was very calculated as she leaned, not far, up to his neck, and slowly sunk her teeth into him.
He gasped and both his hands fisted in her hair, when forced her lips onto his it was almost too rough, but it was ok, because she knew what she was doing. It had been almost a month since she had seen him, she'd spent the evening trying to play it cool and not let him know how painfully she had missed him. She needed to connect with him. To get whatever it was that he gave her that she got no where else. She craved him more than chocolate, which is saying something, and she was so done with casual and clever conversation although she did enjoy talking to him more than anyone else. In some resterant or bar or club they couldn't really talk anway. The real talking would come after.
After darting his tongue between her lips to taste her he nipped at her lower lip. She could feel his teeth were already getting sharp. It was already starting. She let herself believe that it meant he had missed her too. Hope bloomed in her chest.
She would have to becareful with him tonight. If he drew blood with those fangs he'd realise he was changing. The odd truth was that Aaron was some kind of vampire or something and he had the rest of the world fooled, but when he got aroused, he began to transform. She didn't know how things had ended up that way, but he didn't release he was changing, and he didn't realise she knew.
Fae Lilly didn't really know what would happen, if he found out she knew, but instictively she knew she didn't want to find out. It would be bad. Maybe he would eat her, or kill her, maybe she would just disapear, or even worse, maybe he would break up with her.
She pulled back from him to inform him "You're wearing too many clothes," then she smiled and turned away, shedding her own clothing, there was no time for the fumble-groping method of removing there clothes as they usually did. She'd had to turn away because his eyes had already changed as well. White eyes with cat like black pupils that always made her feel like a deer in headlights.
It felt good to get out of her bra and thong. She rubbed her hands over her breasts to help them know they are free at last. It was nice having someone to wear black underwear for. The bra was see through and the thong simply floss, but it went wasted tonight. There would be little teasing tonight.
When she looked back at him he was already nude, he pulled the sheets from the bed, and then they both climbed on to meet in the middle, he was moving with frightening quickness and pulled her to him hard. He was also quick to pull her on top of him, and they both made a love sound as there naked flesh finally met and rubbed together. Eager lips finding each other again, Her hands get lost in his silky hair and his hands slide up the back of her legs, his fingers caressing her inner thighs before letting them raise to cup and squeeze her ample ass. He could feel her smile as they kiss and a whimper escapes the back of her throat. He had calmed down enough to use what he knew about her body to drive her crazy.
The rule was no teasing tonight, so her hands go for his cock, eager to regain control, and he gives a low groan to show his appreciation. She was suprised at how wet the tip of his cock was, but it excited her and she loved every inch of him with her soft fingers, and then she gave a groan of her own as his nails raked up her back, his claws were out, she knew her back would be bloody. He would apologise later and she would lie and say she liked it. She was proud to wear his mark but did not enjoy that kind of pain.
He wouldn't be Aaron much longer. She straddled him and guided his cock to her pussy, his hands now on her hips eagerly helping. She allowed them both one last tease, she rubbed the swollen head of his cock up and down between the wet lips of her cunt, a smooth naughy slick slide that was electric bliss to her and caused him to make a growling noise that sounds closest to that of a panthers. She quickly lowered her pussy down his shaft, rolling her hips to feel every inch inside her.
And then he seemed to find some relief for the moment. Aaron said sincerly, "I do love ya Lilly girl"
And for now it was safe to look in his eyes again, and she moved her hips slowly. Now that she finally had him she wanted it to last.
His hands went to her breasts, rubbing them and holding them tight, rubbing her hard pink nipples. She places her hands on top of his, it always excited her, feeling her own soft tits pressing through the gaps in his hard fingers.
"Baby girl your so beautiful" his hands rubbing over her tummy and thighs and then around to cup her ass, he begins pulling her into him harder, she denighs him nothing, and together the Texans ride at a pace that builds and bucks.
His breathing changes, his nails start digging into her thighs and then he growls like a man, it lights her fire like a blow torch and she selfishly grinds down against him, again and again as her body is rocked from the inside out. She whimpers and sobs as if crying and breaths hard.
And then he is done waiting, he bucks his hips and pulls her into him hard as his pupiles flair and his lips curl into a snarle and then his mouth opens, at first a silent scream and then an echoing hiss out of a nightmare. She closes her eyes. She can't look at him when he fully changes. It's not her Aaron. Its the face of evil. Of a Killer. Something not human.
She gets very still and squeezes her eyes shut tight as she feels him stop breathing. Seconds became minutes as she waits. He will not remember this, transforming. These are lost minutes, and they come to an end when Aaron gasps loudly and then starts to pant for air.
Fae Lilly moves to curl up at his side and waits for her heart to stop beating so fast. The air conditioner that was blasting loudy from the moment they entered the room gives her a chill. She goes to adjust it.
"Damn girl i got your back again. I'm sorry baby. I know you say you like it but I don't want to ever hurt you"
She smiles, and turns to reasure him with it.
"I loves ya babay" she says, letting her accent get thick enough to make them both chuckle. She never can say it seriously. Probably because she means its seriously.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
becareful what you say i'm sensative about my shit. no writer gives up friends and beer and sunshine for a professional opinion. we want you to like it.
Fae Lilly slid the little plastic card into the doors slot and tried to remove it as quickly as possible. Saying a silent thank you when the green light came on and she could open the door. She stepped inside and imediately turned on the light. She could feel Aaron's body heat behind her as he waited to enter the room so she took a few more steps in.
Well the bed was king sized, thats good, bed spread looked clean and new. Everything in the room looked clean and new, although it all looked cheap, especially the decorating, which reminded her that yes she was in what she would consider a sleazy hotel. But maybe she was just too picky, she always liked nice hotels. She would go on vacations with her Grandparents as a child just to get to stay in a nice place like they would stay. That would still be her idea of a vacation, if she still had time to take them.
She turned and hugged Aaron tight, hiding her face against his chest and squashing the awkward moment that always seemed to come just now when they made it to there little temporary hideaway. They lived about 30 minutes apart. Fae Lilly lived in Spade, the biggest city in Rains county. She worked as a nurse in the hospital there and shared a house with a handful of highschool friends she'd never been able to shake loose of. She didn't see them very often, and didn't mind that fact. They were more like family than friends, she cared, whether she wanted to or not. She had short red hair, a pixie cut that was low maintance, her body was a little too curvy, and her sharp nose kept her from being tradtionally pretty. But she had a friendly way about her, never intimidated anyone, and people generally enjoyed her company, and yes, men noticed her. Aaron had, when he showed up in the ER one night. He had been in a horrible crash but showed up without a scratch on him. It had been her task to take care of him, and he had been a horrible flirt and she had dismissed him as such. But then he came back. And he kept coming back.
Aaron lived out in the county a bit, off a farm road on Highway 69. That's where he had his wreck, out on the highway. When Fae Lilly had met the people he lived with out on his ranch she immediately thought "riff raff" like maybe he had leftovers from school days as well. But it was much different with them. They were friends he had made when he went to visit his family England, a graduation gift, and a birthday gift as well. 18 was a big year for Aaron St. John. They were a close group. She called them his "pack" as if they were a pack of wolves, and she'd come to learn that pretty much, thats what they were.
So all things considered, the no tell hotell was the best place for them to go. When they needed to be alone.
She looked up at him and was star struck as always. He was a beautiful man, and there was something deliciously rock star about him even though he was a soft spoken good ole boy that was born and lived in Texas. He had ice blue eyes, and thick cupids bow lips that any woman would be jealous of. Aaron was build lean and mean like you get from working a ranch and he was a perfect 6 feet tall. He had wavy black hair and a prominate widows peak, giving him a heart shaped face.
She'd know him about a year now, learned about a million of the billion of secrets that made him who he was, and in hotels like this, she had learned to play his body like a fiddle. As they say. So it was very calculated as she leaned, not far, up to his neck, and slowly sunk her teeth into him.
He gasped and both his hands fisted in her hair, when forced her lips onto his it was almost too rough, but it was ok, because she knew what she was doing. It had been almost a month since she had seen him, she'd spent the evening trying to play it cool and not let him know how painfully she had missed him. She needed to connect with him. To get whatever it was that he gave her that she got no where else. She craved him more than chocolate, which is saying something, and she was so done with casual and clever conversation although she did enjoy talking to him more than anyone else. In some resterant or bar or club they couldn't really talk anway. The real talking would come after.
After darting his tongue between her lips to taste her he nipped at her lower lip. She could feel his teeth were already getting sharp. It was already starting. She let herself believe that it meant he had missed her too. Hope bloomed in her chest.
She would have to becareful with him tonight. If he drew blood with those fangs he'd realise he was changing. The odd truth was that Aaron was some kind of vampire or something and he had the rest of the world fooled, but when he got aroused, he began to transform. She didn't know how things had ended up that way, but he didn't release he was changing, and he didn't realise she knew.
Fae Lilly didn't really know what would happen, if he found out she knew, but instictively she knew she didn't want to find out. It would be bad. Maybe he would eat her, or kill her, maybe she would just disapear, or even worse, maybe he would break up with her.
She pulled back from him to inform him "You're wearing too many clothes," then she smiled and turned away, shedding her own clothing, there was no time for the fumble-groping method of removing there clothes as they usually did. She'd had to turn away because his eyes had already changed as well. White eyes with cat like black pupils that always made her feel like a deer in headlights.
It felt good to get out of her bra and thong. She rubbed her hands over her breasts to help them know they are free at last. It was nice having someone to wear black underwear for. The bra was see through and the thong simply floss, but it went wasted tonight. There would be little teasing tonight.
When she looked back at him he was already nude, he pulled the sheets from the bed, and then they both climbed on to meet in the middle, he was moving with frightening quickness and pulled her to him hard. He was also quick to pull her on top of him, and they both made a love sound as there naked flesh finally met and rubbed together. Eager lips finding each other again, Her hands get lost in his silky hair and his hands slide up the back of her legs, his fingers caressing her inner thighs before letting them raise to cup and squeeze her ample ass. He could feel her smile as they kiss and a whimper escapes the back of her throat. He had calmed down enough to use what he knew about her body to drive her crazy.
The rule was no teasing tonight, so her hands go for his cock, eager to regain control, and he gives a low groan to show his appreciation. She was suprised at how wet the tip of his cock was, but it excited her and she loved every inch of him with her soft fingers, and then she gave a groan of her own as his nails raked up her back, his claws were out, she knew her back would be bloody. He would apologise later and she would lie and say she liked it. She was proud to wear his mark but did not enjoy that kind of pain.
He wouldn't be Aaron much longer. She straddled him and guided his cock to her pussy, his hands now on her hips eagerly helping. She allowed them both one last tease, she rubbed the swollen head of his cock up and down between the wet lips of her cunt, a smooth naughy slick slide that was electric bliss to her and caused him to make a growling noise that sounds closest to that of a panthers. She quickly lowered her pussy down his shaft, rolling her hips to feel every inch inside her.
And then he seemed to find some relief for the moment. Aaron said sincerly, "I do love ya Lilly girl"
And for now it was safe to look in his eyes again, and she moved her hips slowly. Now that she finally had him she wanted it to last.
His hands went to her breasts, rubbing them and holding them tight, rubbing her hard pink nipples. She places her hands on top of his, it always excited her, feeling her own soft tits pressing through the gaps in his hard fingers.
"Baby girl your so beautiful" his hands rubbing over her tummy and thighs and then around to cup her ass, he begins pulling her into him harder, she denighs him nothing, and together the Texans ride at a pace that builds and bucks.
His breathing changes, his nails start digging into her thighs and then he growls like a man, it lights her fire like a blow torch and she selfishly grinds down against him, again and again as her body is rocked from the inside out. She whimpers and sobs as if crying and breaths hard.
And then he is done waiting, he bucks his hips and pulls her into him hard as his pupiles flair and his lips curl into a snarle and then his mouth opens, at first a silent scream and then an echoing hiss out of a nightmare. She closes her eyes. She can't look at him when he fully changes. It's not her Aaron. Its the face of evil. Of a Killer. Something not human.
She gets very still and squeezes her eyes shut tight as she feels him stop breathing. Seconds became minutes as she waits. He will not remember this, transforming. These are lost minutes, and they come to an end when Aaron gasps loudly and then starts to pant for air.
Fae Lilly moves to curl up at his side and waits for her heart to stop beating so fast. The air conditioner that was blasting loudy from the moment they entered the room gives her a chill. She goes to adjust it.
"Damn girl i got your back again. I'm sorry baby. I know you say you like it but I don't want to ever hurt you"
She smiles, and turns to reasure him with it.
"I loves ya babay" she says, letting her accent get thick enough to make them both chuckle. She never can say it seriously. Probably because she means its seriously.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
becareful what you say i'm sensative about my shit. no writer gives up friends and beer and sunshine for a professional opinion. we want you to like it.
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deceptiviewfilm:
ok. Well those are just my thoughts is all.
deceptiviewfilm:
Yeah. Alot of people remake their own vampire mythology.