"ode to the cunt of a girl outside of the gig tonight"
yes.
please let me in.
i saw those scars & i want my share.
i know this is your scene
you've made it so clear
and i'm trying so hard not to tread on toes.
but please pay attention
for just one second
he's not listening this time
fix your gaze hard on mine.
because the words i don't speak
will strike harder than bombs
regardless of trends
and the essay you read.
x
yes.
please let me in.
i saw those scars & i want my share.
i know this is your scene
you've made it so clear
and i'm trying so hard not to tread on toes.
but please pay attention
for just one second
he's not listening this time
fix your gaze hard on mine.
because the words i don't speak
will strike harder than bombs
regardless of trends
and the essay you read.
x
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The fact that you accepted my suggestion is really flattering, by the way.
Don't stop writing. It's not silly.