The Second Law of Thermodynamics
Spoiled myself on season finales, I remain
viscous and go home for a few days to say goodbye
again. Its wrong to call you from the coast;
you won't follow: we lose touch.
Sharing letters, postcards, and finally
myspace comments, I forget you occupied my space.
The image I have of you smoking outside Kinko's
is streaked with toner and...
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Spoiled myself on season finales, I remain
viscous and go home for a few days to say goodbye
again. Its wrong to call you from the coast;
you won't follow: we lose touch.
Sharing letters, postcards, and finally
myspace comments, I forget you occupied my space.
The image I have of you smoking outside Kinko's
is streaked with toner and...
Read More
THE FIRST LAW OF THERMODYNAMICS
She stood me up! her eyes disappeared
at dusk. She wore elegant gowns
no twentysomething could afford, but
when she wore those striped socks: I was a Roman
who crafted his meagre verses boxed in
by the barbarians: some bloody saxon'll
wipe his carcass with my manuscript: germs
descending to burbles in the burp of a sparrow
from Portugal two...
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She stood me up! her eyes disappeared
at dusk. She wore elegant gowns
no twentysomething could afford, but
when she wore those striped socks: I was a Roman
who crafted his meagre verses boxed in
by the barbarians: some bloody saxon'll
wipe his carcass with my manuscript: germs
descending to burbles in the burp of a sparrow
from Portugal two...
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genevalw:
No I won't hold it against you. I read above you are a grad student here at Cranbrook. That's awesome....lol...I worl just across academy way in the schools.
izzobell:
nice! you need brown leather patches over the elbow on the jacket then you could have a hardcore professor look 
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xani:
ooh very nice, disorienting.
violetred:
good morning! 
New Poem, "The Sea of Ice"
Will you cry when criticized? What questions did you ask,
stupidly? Flustered, fearful I stutter "autistic"
but came out: "agnostic." Never was any good
at Oratory, if I address the Senate, I'd be stoned
in Rome performing in the forum for the quorum
a farce when we both know Octavian forbids levity.
If you ask the historians, they'll also...
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Will you cry when criticized? What questions did you ask,
stupidly? Flustered, fearful I stutter "autistic"
but came out: "agnostic." Never was any good
at Oratory, if I address the Senate, I'd be stoned
in Rome performing in the forum for the quorum
a farce when we both know Octavian forbids levity.
If you ask the historians, they'll also...
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anvlvpr1:
Hey.
Your retype of "Her White Armor" is cool. I already commented on it, but I realized today after re-reading it that I want to print it out and start a pesonal collection of poems/prose/writings I like in a book.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
-M.J. Domingo (aka "anvlvpr1")
Your retype of "Her White Armor" is cool. I already commented on it, but I realized today after re-reading it that I want to print it out and start a pesonal collection of poems/prose/writings I like in a book.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
-M.J. Domingo (aka "anvlvpr1")
izzobell:
lovely poem
i connected with "However I am a child
of Dis: disgust, dissolution, & disappointment:"
i connected with "However I am a child
of Dis: disgust, dissolution, & disappointment:"
Rewrite of poem found in old notebook:
white ribbed shirt two layers underneath
hair pigtailed curtains draping her face
easing white armor her bare shoulder
broken by a beige strap vintage lingerie
holding back the furor of her chest
two caps explode an antique color
like fists I've always had my back to her
while she changed wished to see through my head
the simple...
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white ribbed shirt two layers underneath
hair pigtailed curtains draping her face
easing white armor her bare shoulder
broken by a beige strap vintage lingerie
holding back the furor of her chest
two caps explode an antique color
like fists I've always had my back to her
while she changed wished to see through my head
the simple...
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phunkybrewster:
i dig it immensely papa<3
why dont i know you?
i'm intrigued
mr bloomfield hills
why dont i know you?
i'm intrigued
mr bloomfield hills
anvlvpr1:
Sheesh, man. My third comment on your poem.
That last line grows on me every time I read it: "My beard measures her neck".
Absolute genius.
That last line grows on me every time I read it: "My beard measures her neck".
Absolute genius.
what I've learned my first year at Cranbrook (grad school)
thanks to hanging out with my friends Mike & Violet & their baby Bela, someday I would like to have kids (before it was never even a possibility)
I have the immense capacity to be extremely lazy
as a corrollary to the previous statement: I also have the immense capacity to achieve anything and excell...
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thanks to hanging out with my friends Mike & Violet & their baby Bela, someday I would like to have kids (before it was never even a possibility)
I have the immense capacity to be extremely lazy
as a corrollary to the previous statement: I also have the immense capacity to achieve anything and excell...
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casperstarshack:
sometimes loose clothes get drenched, and then they fit
Fuck Hillary Clinton
One of the main reasons I'm going for Obama on this one is that I think Americans are sick of Heredity or Cronyism... Bush Sr. to Bush Jr., Bill Clinton then his wife Hillary. Rumors in the past of Jeb Bush, Condi, Colin Powell, wouldn't be surprised if Chelsea makes her way to the House of Representatives one day. Politics have always...
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One of the main reasons I'm going for Obama on this one is that I think Americans are sick of Heredity or Cronyism... Bush Sr. to Bush Jr., Bill Clinton then his wife Hillary. Rumors in the past of Jeb Bush, Condi, Colin Powell, wouldn't be surprised if Chelsea makes her way to the House of Representatives one day. Politics have always...
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violetred:
damn, i was just warching "bullitt" the other night...steve mcqueen was fucking hot!
not to mention that car he drives *whew*
not to mention that car he drives *whew*
drkobra:
badass
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violetred:
thanks! i really loved your comment 
casperstarshack:
I never played that one! Alas, my gun was only used to shoot ducks and clay frisbees.
opaque:
those paintings are amazing!! did you do them?
thanks for the comment on my photos too
thanks for the comment on my photos too
pillowfights and light as a feather? i can only imagine...