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This weekend has been a very strange one for me more from the fact something I never thought would happen but really wanted too did.

As I mentioned in an earlier blog this weekend my brother and now sister in law got married after being together for 16 years (that's a life sentence with good behaviour)

Despit both having illnesses that have done there damned...
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Today I get to see my brother marry the woman he has loved for the last 16 years both have had there share of illness and have stood by each other

My brother nearly killed by some unknown illness he got on holiday and Her getting breast cancer beating it only to have it come back earlier this year

They are an amazing couple and...
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I entered the church it was old even by English standards. I slowly made my way between the oak pews the smell of hundreds of years of polishing first with wax then later the acrid stench of man made chemicals. The lingering scent of those that have walked this sacred space before me brushed my senses, men women and children.

I lowered my self into...
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dragan3:
No idea it originally started as a short towards we doing my English so I could go for commission 
gi1martin:
K here’s my verdict (published writer and freelance editor). 1) for the sweet love of Jesus deploy your commas man! 2) if you’re hitting the niche market like forums or what not, then all you need is editing, like the aforementioned commas, but also re-check the story, for example; there’s a bit in there were the vampire pushes homie to the floor and then like five words later is chasing him, even a little addition like ‘he quickly scrambled to his feet’ would go a long way for clarity. If you want advice for potentially selling it DM me.
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Firstly tonight I would like to offer my prayers and condolences to those in Las Vegas, and my sincere admiration to those whose first thought was to aid others by taking them to a medical facility you do humanity proud.

Though I am looking at this as an outsider I really think America needs to sort its gun laws out and restrict weapons. They are...
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