/begin ramble
too many days i've spent counting my broken smiles on the short lived joyride we once called always and forever.
you never looked so beautiful than on the day you walked away for the last time.
my embrace felt your resistance, eyes said more than you could mutter to ease the fall of our empire delicate.
wishing just once i could hear what i wanted over and over while the rest of the world slept escaping from the undying promise that was you and i.
let someone else be the one to bleed tears in the after hours.
clinging to the ghosts, i do what i can to mimmick what we had.
there is no replacement for perfection.
forgotten is my title.
your heart gave for half a moment with the final word at the birth of the new dawn.
my life ended when you began a new one..
/end ramble
the above ramble was written for those who have lost the war but continue the fight.
too many days i've spent counting my broken smiles on the short lived joyride we once called always and forever.
you never looked so beautiful than on the day you walked away for the last time.
my embrace felt your resistance, eyes said more than you could mutter to ease the fall of our empire delicate.
wishing just once i could hear what i wanted over and over while the rest of the world slept escaping from the undying promise that was you and i.
let someone else be the one to bleed tears in the after hours.
clinging to the ghosts, i do what i can to mimmick what we had.
there is no replacement for perfection.
forgotten is my title.
your heart gave for half a moment with the final word at the birth of the new dawn.
my life ended when you began a new one..
/end ramble
the above ramble was written for those who have lost the war but continue the fight.
aeryn:
You changed...I wish i had the other to read both so i could compare but its your ramble and Im just tagging along.
aeryn:
I like both... I tend to edit my journals a lot through the day too.