vide0dr0me

Here is the rough draft of ANGER for Inferno. A different approach, I wrote it almost as if it was a song, and its sadly based off a true story. I want honest feedback, if you hate it tell me now.

ANGER

Beautiful Gina sweet nineteen
Simply nave ran circles with the sly kind
He had it all and then some
He was Prince Charming in the light
The Devil and a fiend in the night

Soon sweet nothings became violent symphonies
She began to wear long sleeves and sunglasses
To hide the bruises and cover the shame

Why Gina why do you stay?
Youre an angel and youre better than that
Her once full eyes are gray with misery
Please God give her the strength to walk away

The pain didnt end as she held herself
Locked in the monsters den
Bleeding and crying were all that was stripped of her
I wish I knew to give you the strength then
You dont have to stay.

Why Gina why do you stay?
Did you think no one else would love you again?
Her once full eyes are gray with misery
Please God shes had enough set her free.

Hurt again, lost all her friends
He damaged her perfect looks
Shattered her once bright spirit
I prayed God and he did nothing
Now shes in a hospital bed
Tied to machines to keep her here



It takes alot to push me into the red zone but any "man" who lays a hand on a woman. Sadly she never got away from him, shes still under his thumb. If I could get my hands on him this what I would do to him.




And im not selling you a story, I wish I was though. I miss her I havent seen her in over 2 years.