Time is running out, you fuckers had should be sending me some written scenes or good killing music, or both!
Get on it!
P.S. How are you?
Killing Scenes Contest Submitals as of 8.10.05
See contest info below for details on how to enter
Submittals:
GreaseBunny:
She walked up to the bed.
"It's finally come down to it" she thought.
Her mother had made her promise that if she ever got this bad, she would end
it for her. She didn't want to exist and suffer for years. She had her
responsibilities. They were too poor for anything fancy, and her mother
always hated Doctors anyway. Better to keep things in house.
Stephanie bent down, kissed her sweaty forehead goodbye, smoothed her
hair off her face, and held the pillow in place. It didn't take very long.
She was weak. She barely struggled. Stephanie didn't cry.
Dance of the dead Children.mp3
TinyElvis:
[Cue Music] Iris out on our hero, Jimmy sitting at the cafe. Jimmy gets a call. Informs him the whereabouts of Steve 'the fish.' We follow Jimmy down the street to his 1974 white Caddy. Jimmy is pissed he has to drive down to Brooklyn, but understands his job. Being 'made' last week comes with certain obligations. Jimmy picks up Anthony on his way. They know 'The Fish' is hold up at Molly's pub on Flastbush just past Foster Ave. In the righteous leather gear of the day complete with white loafers, Jimmy and Tony walk in unknown in the neighborhood pub. They strike up conversation with the locals to figure out who 'The Fish' is. They find out and strike up a game of pool with him. Jimmy is winning, but soon tires of the game and decides to just bitch hit Steve with the pool cue. One fucking crack, and boom on the floor. Tony proceeds to drive his pool cue directly into the fat gut of 'The Fish' spewing blood everywhere. Job done.---------------the music underscores the whole quick and edit style scene.
Trouble Man.mp3
aardvark:
Scene of an intelligent, sculpted man, and a beautiful, slender woman
meeting in the open and proceeding to melt into a scene of them in a
bedroom with a luxurious bed witha canopy. The only sound is the music in
the background. Sensual, slow kissing which turns into making love.
The man pulls out a knife and proceeds to silently slice the throat of
the woman. After she has finished her death throws, he gently strokes
her face and walks away.
Deathblow.mp3
TinyElvis:
Jeff was standing outside of his place on the corner of 110th St. Here was my opportunity to get the money he owed me. I pulled up in my 1972 Dodge Challanger [Mopar Purple] and proceeded to ask Jeff if he had the five large.
Jeff's reply was, "Fuck off, E!"
He started off running down the street. (cue music) I sit for a split second......punch the gas (burning some major 'rubber') running over the little fucker over with 420 horsepower. Bounce out and rifle through this douche bags shitty ass pockets. 250 bucks doesn't quite cover my lose, but the pool of blood seeping from his head sure settles my nerves.
You can get it if you really want it.mp3
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Official Contest Info:
toneski@toneski.com
Get on it!
P.S. How are you?
Killing Scenes Contest Submitals as of 8.10.05
See contest info below for details on how to enter
Submittals:
GreaseBunny:
She walked up to the bed.
"It's finally come down to it" she thought.
Her mother had made her promise that if she ever got this bad, she would end
it for her. She didn't want to exist and suffer for years. She had her
responsibilities. They were too poor for anything fancy, and her mother
always hated Doctors anyway. Better to keep things in house.
Stephanie bent down, kissed her sweaty forehead goodbye, smoothed her
hair off her face, and held the pillow in place. It didn't take very long.
She was weak. She barely struggled. Stephanie didn't cry.
Dance of the dead Children.mp3
TinyElvis:
[Cue Music] Iris out on our hero, Jimmy sitting at the cafe. Jimmy gets a call. Informs him the whereabouts of Steve 'the fish.' We follow Jimmy down the street to his 1974 white Caddy. Jimmy is pissed he has to drive down to Brooklyn, but understands his job. Being 'made' last week comes with certain obligations. Jimmy picks up Anthony on his way. They know 'The Fish' is hold up at Molly's pub on Flastbush just past Foster Ave. In the righteous leather gear of the day complete with white loafers, Jimmy and Tony walk in unknown in the neighborhood pub. They strike up conversation with the locals to figure out who 'The Fish' is. They find out and strike up a game of pool with him. Jimmy is winning, but soon tires of the game and decides to just bitch hit Steve with the pool cue. One fucking crack, and boom on the floor. Tony proceeds to drive his pool cue directly into the fat gut of 'The Fish' spewing blood everywhere. Job done.---------------the music underscores the whole quick and edit style scene.
Trouble Man.mp3
aardvark:
Scene of an intelligent, sculpted man, and a beautiful, slender woman
meeting in the open and proceeding to melt into a scene of them in a
bedroom with a luxurious bed witha canopy. The only sound is the music in
the background. Sensual, slow kissing which turns into making love.
The man pulls out a knife and proceeds to silently slice the throat of
the woman. After she has finished her death throws, he gently strokes
her face and walks away.
Deathblow.mp3
TinyElvis:
Jeff was standing outside of his place on the corner of 110th St. Here was my opportunity to get the money he owed me. I pulled up in my 1972 Dodge Challanger [Mopar Purple] and proceeded to ask Jeff if he had the five large.
Jeff's reply was, "Fuck off, E!"
He started off running down the street. (cue music) I sit for a split second......punch the gas (burning some major 'rubber') running over the little fucker over with 420 horsepower. Bounce out and rifle through this douche bags shitty ass pockets. 250 bucks doesn't quite cover my lose, but the pool of blood seeping from his head sure settles my nerves.
You can get it if you really want it.mp3
___________________________________________________
Official Contest Info:
toneski@toneski.com
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