theloonie

Well, I said I was going to make a continuation of my short story and I finally got around to doing it. Once again I am asking for your opinions on it, on where it could be improved, and where I should go from here with it. And for those who asked, the only way I'll post a revealing pic is if someone is willing to come take one, the only ones I have are crappy webcam pics and a partial from 98. Anyway here is the second part of my short story(go back a day for part one)

As I awoke in the morning with my head still foggy from sleep it seemed as though I was still dreaming because the room smelled of roses and I felt her nibbling her way up the inside edges of my legs. She slowly ran her nails along the sides of my chest and, once she noticed I had woken up, she licked my flaccid member playfully and winked at me. It didn't take long for her actions to have a noticeable effect, and as soon as I was firming up she began tickling my scrotum and massaging my shaft. Within moments she had me rock hard and promptly climbed on top of me, guiding me into her as she lowered herself into position. Ordering me to hold still she untied my hands from the bed and tied them together, then sliding them over her head and behind her. Once I was buried deep in her she started grinding her hips forcefully against me while digging her nails into my sides and arching her back. Shortly after she had worked her way up my sides with her nails she reached back and untied my feet, then in one quick motion she rolled us over and bit the corner of my neck. I obediently began thrusting quickly and, after working my hands to her head, started pulling her hair firmly. When I grabbed her hair and pulled she immediately responded by grabbing my ass and digging her nails in tightly. Pulling my knees up and using them to spread her legs I drove deeper inside her pumping hard and shifting back and forth causing her to scream in ecstasy. As I'm slowing down for a moment to catch my breath she pushes me up and off her, then she rolls over and pulls me into her by grabbing my ass tightly with her nails. With each thrust she slams back into it for a bit before reaching back and fondling my jewels. Suddenly she shifts, straightening her legs and pushing my legs straight, causing us to be laying flat on the bed, then she clamps her legs together tight enough that it would be painful to try to pull out, finally she reaches back and pulls my knees forward and tells me to lean all the way back. With me being held in such a position and moving in and out rhythmically quickly brings her to multiple orgasms and when she reaches back and claws my legs I come to a explosive release. I promptly collapsed on top of her, exhausted and spent, then thanked her for waking me up like this. We then got up, showered, and as I headed out the door for work I kissed her goodbye and told her than I would be bringing my secretary home with me to meet her.





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