ok here is something i wrote when i was about 14 or so. Proof that i have no writing ability, then again it took me only a minute or two to write it out. freeflow or something.
"people are so fuckin stupid they dont seem to realize their madness i see through these eyes you try to be nice but they fuck you up i want to be noticed for who i am yet i seem to be unfocused unknown your feeling are not shown i want to be something i can never be why did you do this to me people want to believethey have a grip on reality but in their ignorance they are happy & gleeful, depressing is everthing cant you see youre nothing to me just another fucked up person who wants to fuck with my mind i make them think everything is fine by acting like a fool so you think everything is cool why do i want you with me when you cant be able to seewhat youve done to me people suck just want to fuck you up you just want to be a friend this shit will never end they make you cry while they pass you by"
no revisions were made...in its entirety. heres something better(of course i didnt write it)
Trading life for life. It all must fall. It must end with us. It must end with me.
Insinuations of what might be. Fight through deprivation. There will be no sleep.
Heed my cry. Because of greed and hatred. To dust we return.
They will see the strength in our numbers. Only then will the self-righteous learn.
Insinuations of what might be.
To the masses we mean nothing, but it starts in the hearts of the few.
Witness the birth of a people. Unite. Renew.
There is no forever, just today. Don't let your sacrifice waste away.
Through change and purity, turn the shadows to light.
Buried beneath the ashes is a passion for life
There is no forever, just today. Don't let your sacrifice waste away.
Let there be no more of this bloodshed. Heed my cry.
There is no forever, just today. Don't let your sacrifice waste away.
"people are so fuckin stupid they dont seem to realize their madness i see through these eyes you try to be nice but they fuck you up i want to be noticed for who i am yet i seem to be unfocused unknown your feeling are not shown i want to be something i can never be why did you do this to me people want to believethey have a grip on reality but in their ignorance they are happy & gleeful, depressing is everthing cant you see youre nothing to me just another fucked up person who wants to fuck with my mind i make them think everything is fine by acting like a fool so you think everything is cool why do i want you with me when you cant be able to seewhat youve done to me people suck just want to fuck you up you just want to be a friend this shit will never end they make you cry while they pass you by"
no revisions were made...in its entirety. heres something better(of course i didnt write it)
Trading life for life. It all must fall. It must end with us. It must end with me.
Insinuations of what might be. Fight through deprivation. There will be no sleep.
Heed my cry. Because of greed and hatred. To dust we return.
They will see the strength in our numbers. Only then will the self-righteous learn.
Insinuations of what might be.
To the masses we mean nothing, but it starts in the hearts of the few.
Witness the birth of a people. Unite. Renew.
There is no forever, just today. Don't let your sacrifice waste away.
Through change and purity, turn the shadows to light.
Buried beneath the ashes is a passion for life
There is no forever, just today. Don't let your sacrifice waste away.
Let there be no more of this bloodshed. Heed my cry.
There is no forever, just today. Don't let your sacrifice waste away.
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ahaha your black cat is sooo cool... i have a black cat, and i named him scraffy (with *A*)... i have another little cat, who looks like kalakoa LOL and i named him mc.kill ahahaha i like their names
you were a very potty mouthed 14 year old. but weren't we all.