Friday Dec 29, 2006

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Well, I have been having this terrible headache today but anyway i'm presenting this my own story for the first time called "Snapshot Love", posted at the Smutty, Dirty Filthy stoytime group, it starts slow but it will blow you away!


ladyjane:
Sexy vignette....nice read with a ciggy & Bailey's caramel in the middle of the afternoon!

I love that you fleshed out Leila & Warren and that there's plot with character development, a story. It's not just a slam, bam, thank you m'aam.

I like the slowness, it's like a beautiful adagio and its' waiting (i kept going, "go back to his place...NOW)...

to me, the climax was what Leila found at his apartment. arrrgh...that killed me.

and the denouement was what followed between the lovers & it was very sweet.

thank you for putting your art out there, miss N, can't wait to read more!! <3
temple_loren:
Thank you, ladyjane, I thought I made it slow but it will get more interesting on the second part :-)

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