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striking black gold in the mind mine

5/25/05

only at this stage can i look back
and feel the full impact of a furrowed brow
seeing how the pent up place of the then
plays itself out
in almost every space of the now

today i am equal parts what i have been and what i might be
and while the present me buzzes in...
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candycox:
I always enjoy your poems, so talented... I like the idea behind this poem, and the line "feel the full impact of a furrowed brow." You're inspiring me to write more. I don't write nearly enough.

xoxo, CC
zak:
today i am equal parts what i have been and what i might be

this is good. i like this.
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life without Cable is complex. there is so much time to do other things, but i just cheat and buy DVD's of shows i love and miss. so lately i have spent a great deal of time with "Reno 9-1-1" "The Simpsons" and "World Poker Tour" in rotation. Does that mean i don't have TV? Do i watch TV? i can't watch shows other than...
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review for the twentysomething final exam

feed me the dull florescent light
and in the night the gnat flies dance beneath my eyes
into my brain trying to cling to the precious sweat of sanity
take my hand and tell me this still makes a man of me
and let your smooth sand skin
take me away while i slip inside
as you stare at...
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rayoflight969:
Like how it rolls..... you should come to big TEX and help me take the fucking place over with spoken word.... all the bitches and punks..... would end up fucked and punch drunk! kiss
zak:
read a couple of the poems you've posted in your journal recently.. and i think for a while about what kind of comment i can post, but sadly come up short.
i have never been able to comment on works i think are particularly good. afraid i might do them some injustice.

surreal
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FLESH CANNIBAL WORD SPITTER (or what the fuck can i write for the open mic tonight?)

i gotta spit a good piece so you can feel my disease creep off of me
like old peeling paint
i gotta paint a diction picture of a tortured saint before you notice my
hands shaking and my voice goes hoarse and faint
inside the lame sing-song rhymes hides...
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candycox:
I really like this one. I like the comparison to the cannibal... I could really feel your words... sharp... glaring... honest. You generally have a strong, engaging tone in all of your pieces. I ♥ this poem.


xoxo, CC
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clear day x-ray vision

synthetic prophetic word herds pathetic
stuck inside a fucked up mind behind below
forget it
regretting some but loving all
the world is a rock the world is a ball
they all fall down
my dirty socks are my downfall
a door with locks is my downfall
my brain and heart are my downfall

artistic linguistic bullshit letters dying together on...
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candycox:
I like all the poetry that you've been writing. Very original, like the internal rhymes, your words flow well. Thanks for commenting on my stuff too by the way. Yay for us poetry lovers!

xoxo, CC
rayoflight969:
FUCK YA! kiss
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today i have nothing to say so i will just ramble away and hand a thought and how can i handle what is brought to me; i want to be pure freedom ; i want to be sedated and numb; i want to be a wise and old guy with the heart of a man and the eyes of the young; too much fun early...
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i wrote this five or six years ago but i want to share it again with myself and anybody else who wants to read it. unlike most shit i write, which i want to hide or burn, i still feel this simple little pooper:
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crying acid tears

digital high, cyberfuck
emailcommunication
cable lines that suck your mind
machines that change the station

PC death,...
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it's late. i started drinking green tea instead of coffee beacause it's better for you. but now i drink it at night when i wouldn't drink coffee because it's supposed to have less caffeine and if i drank coffee i wouldn't be able to get to sleep.

this is reminding me of the time i started smoking cloves instead of regular cigarettes when i picked...
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__rae__:
ARRR!!!
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i just posted something else on "poetry kicks ass" group. it's not that new but i dig it. check it out.

i like to nap. especially when its kind of cold out.

anyone... Bueller... Bueller... anyone?...



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i wrote this today at work...to anyone who may read it, feel free to share your thoughts. or just tell me what you had to eat today or whether the Police Academy series of films greatly affected your life and why.

(on sharing my) selfish pool of introspective drool

looking lovely, feeling ugly
reeling my selfish in
from a pool of introspective drool
when there...
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