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Yeah the names were just randomly picked. If I ever actually have an opportunity to publish it, (unlikely, obviously) I might think about actually putting some thought into that. As it is, I'm more concerned about the other elements. Originally the main character went totally nameless, and then I added a bit to the conversation with the priest, and eventually couldn't really avoid it. The other thing I'm not really happy with is the country they were at war with was never named, which got awkward in the dialogue. I didn't want it to seem in any way political or get at all specific on the details, but it got a bit sticky there.

I dunno, I figure that stuff's pretty random and can be fixed.

Anyway, thanks for reading it and commenting, I thought people would see the entry was long and not even bother. And thanks also for the compliment.