sieney

I could not find the thread for critiques so I am posting here, I hope that is OK.

First off I think the set was was really cute and you looked adorable. (Maybe biased bc I love gingers!) I liked that there were different angles and that you used the props like the chair and the knife and had fun. It was also awesome that your shoes were the same color wood as the chair, did you plan that??

One thing I noticed though is some shots were I felt like I wanted the focus to be on your face more and it wasn't... Boobs are great but w/some much of the shot filled w/stuff besides the boobs it didn't seem like it should be the focus, or if it was it should have been cropped more to be nearly only boobs in the frame.

Some shots it was nice where it focused on like the cake or you cutting w/the knife or w/e but in some it just seemed like the focus wasn't planned on anywhere specific.

I think this set was a good but w/the mixed focus I am not sure it will go live. But who knows.. good luck miss, I look forward to seeing your next work! <3DC