Ok I wrote a new poem but I am having a hard time deciding between two backgrounds that I made from this site to go with it. Maybe you can all help. Here is the poem remember I have only taken a bit of english and still pretty much suck.
First Image
Second Image
"A Visitation by the Divine Twins
A fissure in the drapes.
Reveals traffics fiery beat
the distant dazzling light
but deep within the cave
He entices us to enter
while crushing love with our feet
The hum of mechanisms,
We reach a forest, green
Soft to the touch, The bed of dreams
Bathed in little light. We mount and fall into deep sleep
What monster have we released?
What visions of suffering
What devastation
What is its name?
Mind wandering, we see flashes
Glimpses, of mourning and fear
The rumble of anger, silent but close
Wind seems to move with menace
Into the labyrinth we find the door
Should this be open, dread fills the mind
We know the thing that cause the beast
The moment man became more
We open and feel the rush of danger
Here it is, most painful
The moment when hearts breaks.
For the girl resists not a backward glance-
Evolving, love becomes betrayal.
He contracts, like the snake before the bite
Descending into the carpet of the green forest
resisting the rouse of morning
a mere shadow, fading from blackened sight
unreachable, shrouded by drapes
A small day contrasted with deep night.
Shades and shadows whisper to us
what horrific pain is present in the deep.
Our visit, shapeless presences, only felt in passing.
Dark and ruling he knows we are here
His anger causes flight, we wince
Touched by the dark fragments of this soul.
We are but two, here, answering the call
Time has not meaning, not here
Only two warring factions love and hate
The real meaning of life is here
But to what question is the answer
All that is truly evil, is here
Young and in-love, they feel pain and torment
Faced with eternity alone with the self
Alone with only thoughts
Dreams that never come true
Seas of black
A reminder of the nothing that is to come
I quick move and down from the cliff in despair.
With this act, all feeling, all hurt, all pain is named
We have the sight
A woman on the edge, in form an angel
Perhaps, she holds hes secret,
the red on her hands, his heart, still kept by her grasp
Still beating still in love, but why
Water springs from her corners
Scaring the angelic face she wares
entangled in his fate, her feelings numb
Grief for grief, she knows his death
To our dark tongues the oracles may hear
of many futures becoming
we see many floods of humanity
And yet still swimming, still holding our breaths
Awakening, we plunge into the pool of reality
Like a drop of water disturbs the springs of hell
Mounting like the wave
it washes the thought of the two hearts
Remnants yet to be forgotten, life in chains
Reality binds the soul to the hell that is
Why always the longing
The visage of time passed
Driven by the thirst, erstwhile
Un-excepting the ruling of fates
What will become of the shadow in the cave?
to find a way out or a way back in?
"A Visitation by the Divine Twins"
Rewritten to fit my mood
First Image
Second Image
"A Visitation by the Divine Twins
A fissure in the drapes.
Reveals traffics fiery beat
the distant dazzling light
but deep within the cave
He entices us to enter
while crushing love with our feet
The hum of mechanisms,
We reach a forest, green
Soft to the touch, The bed of dreams
Bathed in little light. We mount and fall into deep sleep
What monster have we released?
What visions of suffering
What devastation
What is its name?
Mind wandering, we see flashes
Glimpses, of mourning and fear
The rumble of anger, silent but close
Wind seems to move with menace
Into the labyrinth we find the door
Should this be open, dread fills the mind
We know the thing that cause the beast
The moment man became more
We open and feel the rush of danger
Here it is, most painful
The moment when hearts breaks.
For the girl resists not a backward glance-
Evolving, love becomes betrayal.
He contracts, like the snake before the bite
Descending into the carpet of the green forest
resisting the rouse of morning
a mere shadow, fading from blackened sight
unreachable, shrouded by drapes
A small day contrasted with deep night.
Shades and shadows whisper to us
what horrific pain is present in the deep.
Our visit, shapeless presences, only felt in passing.
Dark and ruling he knows we are here
His anger causes flight, we wince
Touched by the dark fragments of this soul.
We are but two, here, answering the call
Time has not meaning, not here
Only two warring factions love and hate
The real meaning of life is here
But to what question is the answer
All that is truly evil, is here
Young and in-love, they feel pain and torment
Faced with eternity alone with the self
Alone with only thoughts
Dreams that never come true
Seas of black
A reminder of the nothing that is to come
I quick move and down from the cliff in despair.
With this act, all feeling, all hurt, all pain is named
We have the sight
A woman on the edge, in form an angel
Perhaps, she holds hes secret,
the red on her hands, his heart, still kept by her grasp
Still beating still in love, but why
Water springs from her corners
Scaring the angelic face she wares
entangled in his fate, her feelings numb
Grief for grief, she knows his death
To our dark tongues the oracles may hear
of many futures becoming
we see many floods of humanity
And yet still swimming, still holding our breaths
Awakening, we plunge into the pool of reality
Like a drop of water disturbs the springs of hell
Mounting like the wave
it washes the thought of the two hearts
Remnants yet to be forgotten, life in chains
Reality binds the soul to the hell that is
Why always the longing
The visage of time passed
Driven by the thirst, erstwhile
Un-excepting the ruling of fates
What will become of the shadow in the cave?
to find a way out or a way back in?
"A Visitation by the Divine Twins"
Rewritten to fit my mood
your english is not so bad!