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Wednesday Aug 29, 2007

Aug 29, 2007
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This is going to be one of those self-indulgent writers' posts...

I have, for one of my units, to go through my own writing once a week and find a sentence I think really works and that I'm proud of. This is tougher than it sounds.

I was looking at some of my old work just now and found a page of haikus I wrote years ago. They made me smile and I thought I'd post a few here to see if they did the same for you.

Now, I know that the traditional haiku is seasonal in theme and motif. I chose not to conform to that trope, but I did stick to the expected syllabic constraints...I think.

Firstly a haiku about haikus:

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You have just three lines;
And seventeen syllables
to impress me... Go.



Love:

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A true love is one;
That accepts things about you;
That you, yourself, hate.



You can decide what this one is about:

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A vein of white dust;
Like snow on small mountaintops.
There's frost on your nose.



Sex:

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I'm sitting alone;
Playing Nine Inch Nails' "Closer";
And thinking of you.



And sex again (but this time in a more traditional haiku tone):

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Beautiful new bloom.
Blossom opens at my touch.
Scent on my finger.



Please don't feel the need to comment. I understand what it's like when someone posts their own work. I just wanted to share.

sway:
Hooray, I love it when you share and I get to read your stuff.

*jiggles about with glee*

kiss
Aug 29, 2007
scarlettjen:
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed those smile
Aug 29, 2007

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