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Sunday Dec 17, 2006

Dec 17, 2006
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Another installment for my peeps. The last one got rave reviews from the 2 people that read it. So Peace, Retro, this is for you. <3


Raziel wallked through the city gates of Shadrith and made his way to the town square. Since he'd departed Thule he'd been feeling a little anxious to just relax. Since the Hydruin presence was no where around Shadrith, it was the place to go. He looked high and low for a tavern, but wasn't having any luck, so he stopped at a street vendor's cart.
"Excuse me, could you tell me where I could find a tavern around here?" Raziel put his had on the vendor's cart. "I thought this was a welcoming town?"
The vendor shook his head and pointed at one of the signs on a building. "Right there, we call'em inns now sonny." The vendor nodded and went on down the street as Raziel went into the inn. As soon as he walked in the door, everyone turned and looked straight at him. Raziel started to walk towards the bar when a rather large man jumped up in his way.
"This inn is members only, and you're not a member." After spitting his words in Raziel's face, he turned and looked at everyone
As Raziel's had started to clench up, a young woman came running up and got between them. "Please don't mind him sir, he's drunk." As she spoke, he whirled and slapped her as hard as possible. Flying through the air, she landed on a table and slid off the other side. Laughing, the hulking ape looked to everyone, who laughed with him.
Raziel's eyes narrowed to slits as his hand grasped the hilt of his beloved Masamune. "Scum like you has no place in Alenia. Apologize to the lady, or taste my blade. What's you're decision?"
Just as Raziel had finished speaking the man lunged at him. Raziel easily side-stepped and kicked him out the door. Walking over to the girl on the floor he picked her up and wiped the blood off her forehead. He sat her down and looked for anymore cuts that she might have had. Just as he finished, the giant man came storming back in the tavern.
"WHERE IS HE? I AM GREN THE MAULER! NO ONE DISRESPECTS ME! NO ONE!!!!!!!!!!!" As Gren screamed and yelled, Raziel stood up and turned to him.
"Leave now Gren, you're life hangs in the balance" Raziel stayed calm and collected as a table flew by him. A few seconds later, another went straight at him. As it reached him it split into two perfect halves, and went around him Everyone's eyes went to the hand Raziel had on the Masamune.
"I don't know who you are little man, but I am going to crush you!" Gren started towards Raziel clenching his fists and grunting. Right as he got too him. his belt split, and his pants fell down. "What is this?! How did you do that?!"
"I am Raziel Ovali Deathrin. Gren leave Shadrith, or spend eternity here, but eternity will cost you you're life." Raziel smiled as Gren pulled his pants up and ran out the door screaming. Everyone in the inn grew quiet as all eyes settled on Raziel.
Raziel turned to see the young lady smiling at him. "Thank you Raziel Deathrin, you have done us a great service today." Before Raziel could say anything, she kissed him on the cheek and started for the inn door. Everyone in the inn looked at Raziel and laughed.
Finally the barkeep looked at Raziel, "Go get her son, that's the happiest I've seen that young lady in forever."
Looking at the barkeep, Raziel shook his head, "no I'm sorry, I don't really chase women much." Just as Raziel spolke the barkeep shook his head
"I said the same thing fifty years ago, and I never saw her again. Still haven't gotten a beautiful woman, so I guess that's what I get."
Raziel nodded and walked out the door of the inn, where the young lady was sitting. Pulling up a chair next to her, Raziel looked over at her.
She smiled and winked at him. "How are you?"
Raziel smiled ever so faintly, and leaned closer, "Quite well finally, and you miss...."

to be continued.
btyjugs:
As a person who writes for a living,I say to you this great,I love it you are very talented now i am looking forward to read more. snuggles and kisses Retro
Dec 17, 2006
peas:
wow, its really good. :]
Dec 17, 2006

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