Last night, like every other night of my life I was laying in bed letting the thoughts and events of my day and life play out before like a scratchy old movie. I thought about all the people that were alive that day and gone by the time night fell. I didn't know any of them. Not a single name. It made me wonder how...
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Well here's a poem I wrote last night and another I wrote about the Tsunami thing. Hope ya like'em. I know you like the one -Cigarettes- Mallory but I don't think you've heard the other one.
-Cigarettes-
Cigarettes and sillouhets
Her shadows on the wall
Creeping through my bedroom door
She slips into the hall
I hear her still in whispers
Still see her in...
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-Cigarettes-
Cigarettes and sillouhets
Her shadows on the wall
Creeping through my bedroom door
She slips into the hall
I hear her still in whispers
Still see her in...
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malloryknoxx:
Hey doll 
I'm always happy to read your stuff! And you're quite the sweetie yourself
I'm always happy to read your stuff! And you're quite the sweetie yourself
malloryknoxx:
Hey cutie
Trust me - I would LOVE to unplug the phones and sleep for three days.
BUT - until the granny-in-law goes into the nursing home next week, that's not an option.
Of COURSE you'll get a signed copy of my book, silly I want one from YOU too after you get published!
Trust me - I would LOVE to unplug the phones and sleep for three days.
BUT - until the granny-in-law goes into the nursing home next week, that's not an option.
Of COURSE you'll get a signed copy of my book, silly
I want one from YOU too after you get published!Wll, it's been snowing all damn day today. It's dumped down at least 8 inches, and is supposed to snow all night and tomorrow. Damn snow!
Ok, well finally feeling all better...I haven't been sick in a long ass time and it blows. Anyway, thought I would put up a few of my poems, hope ya all like them, and if not....tough shit
-Black-
Black on black
Black on white
Black lives in this house tonight
Black on me
Black on you
Black within the corners too
Black brick walls
Hold...
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-Black-
Black on black
Black on white
Black lives in this house tonight
Black on me
Black on you
Black within the corners too
Black brick walls
Hold...
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malloryknoxx:
I'd definately be interested in reading more of your stuff
I'm with you on the not changing for other people thing. I tried that myself, and found it to be downright soul-crushing.
Besides - the older I get, the more I find I'm not real interested in their reindeer games anyway.
When I was in my early twenties, I thought that maybe I only felt such disdain for the masses because I was shoved into the fringe element - maybe, I was just insecure and secretly wanted to be included.
Now - I stay in the fringe element because I like it here
Turns out that I was right in the first place - most people are one or more of the following: Boring, stupid, or thoroughly irritating.
I'm with you on the not changing for other people thing. I tried that myself, and found it to be downright soul-crushing.
Besides - the older I get, the more I find I'm not real interested in their reindeer games anyway.
When I was in my early twenties, I thought that maybe I only felt such disdain for the masses because I was shoved into the fringe element - maybe, I was just insecure and secretly wanted to be included.
Now - I stay in the fringe element because I like it here
Turns out that I was right in the first place - most people are one or more of the following: Boring, stupid, or thoroughly irritating.
malloryknoxx:
That one was really good too.
I kinda felt like that for awhile after a good friend of mine commited suicide.
I kinda felt like that for awhile after a good friend of mine commited suicide.
So it's 12:16 pm woke up this morning feeling shity still....I hate feeling sick 
Well, it's still snowing outside, and we are supposed to be getting a storm coming through here by Fri. so I guess I wont have to worry about working for a couple days at least
Well, it's still snowing outside, and we are supposed to be getting a storm coming through here by Fri. so I guess I wont have to worry about working for a couple days at least
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cureelise:
Welcum to SG cutie . Your new addiction
prince_uf_pain:
Ok, well finally feeling all better...I haven't been sick in a long ass time and it blows. Anyway, thought I would put up a few of my poems, hope ya all like them, and if not....tough shit
-Black-
Black on black
Black on white
Black lives in this house tonight
Black on me
Black on you
Black within the corners too
Black brick walls
Hold blackened stars
And blackened light
Down blackened halls
Where black meets white
And black meets red
And black becomes the living dead
Black on black
Black on white
Black will eat our hearts tonight
-Such A Kiss-
The taste of love's sweet poison
Has soured on my lips
And leaves me ever lonely
On a night as cold as this
Embraced by loves sweet sorrow
What cure could I have missed
If a kiss could sweeten sorrow
Then I long for such a kiss
-History-
Close your eyes
Pretend you don't see
As our future becomes our history
It faded fast
It drowned in tears
And weeks and months turned into years
So close your eyes
Pretend you don't see
What years of pain have done to me
-Black-
Black on black
Black on white
Black lives in this house tonight
Black on me
Black on you
Black within the corners too
Black brick walls
Hold blackened stars
And blackened light
Down blackened halls
Where black meets white
And black meets red
And black becomes the living dead
Black on black
Black on white
Black will eat our hearts tonight
-Such A Kiss-
The taste of love's sweet poison
Has soured on my lips
And leaves me ever lonely
On a night as cold as this
Embraced by loves sweet sorrow
What cure could I have missed
If a kiss could sweeten sorrow
Then I long for such a kiss
-History-
Close your eyes
Pretend you don't see
As our future becomes our history
It faded fast
It drowned in tears
And weeks and months turned into years
So close your eyes
Pretend you don't see
What years of pain have done to me
I can't add any more friends to my list, as I am required by law to only have 10 friends haha, but I appreciate the compliment.
Also, your poetry thread got bumped again. Try not to take that shit so personally. I wouldn't advise asking for critique on the boards again, although I didn't really read your first post as asking for a critique. I read it more as "Tell me it sucks if you want, I'm still going to post it." I only advise not doing it again, as per SG unwritten "rules" the boards aren't the place to do so. The poetry group, however, should give you actual critique without all of the rudeness. The boards are a bit too general, and you can't weed out which are serious and which are just taking the piss to be mean to the new guy (quite a syndrome around here, bandwagon jumping). Good luck