Hey everyone, its me again. 
Anyways, a few days ago, I wrote my own version of a poem, I know its more of a rant. However, I just went with my feelings and stared writing things down. Just now got up enough guts to post it, to see what people thought. Would love any feed back on this.
Thanks
Chris
DEAR GOD
Dear God! Have you heard my Prayers?
I know Your Listening, I Feel Your Presence In The Air.
My Eyes Are Wide Open- Looking For Guidance.
Is This The Part, Where I Break Down and Strive?
A Test To Become A Better Man?
To Realize All My Wrongs?
To Testify To Others, While I open Up My Arms?
To Show Love To People, That I never Have Before?
To Believe In Anothers Dream?
Or To Listen To One Who Is Going Mad, Or Another Whos Life Is Hanging By A String?
While Im Banging My Head, Up Against The Wall, Fighting My Own Demons?
Feeling My Own Pain, While hearing the suffering of others?
Is Earth The True Hell? Lost Souls Looking For Solid Ground?
If Life Is This Grand Stage, Can We Change Our Roles?
Or Do We Have To Keep Fighting This Battle Of Hate?
Thrown Behind Enemy Lines Day After Day!
Are You Training Us To Make Us Stronger?
So When We Scream In The Night, We Can Comfort One Another?
Dear God! Im Sorry If It Looks As If Im Calling You Out!
Im Not- Its In You I Trust!
Dear God, I Know You Love! Please Show Us The Way To Universal Peace.
For Brothers And Sisters, In Your Eyes We Are, For Eternity!
. BY: C.S. BOATMAN 05/27/2005
Anyways, a few days ago, I wrote my own version of a poem, I know its more of a rant. However, I just went with my feelings and stared writing things down. Just now got up enough guts to post it, to see what people thought. Would love any feed back on this.
Thanks
Chris
DEAR GOD
Dear God! Have you heard my Prayers?
I know Your Listening, I Feel Your Presence In The Air.
My Eyes Are Wide Open- Looking For Guidance.
Is This The Part, Where I Break Down and Strive?
A Test To Become A Better Man?
To Realize All My Wrongs?
To Testify To Others, While I open Up My Arms?
To Show Love To People, That I never Have Before?
To Believe In Anothers Dream?
Or To Listen To One Who Is Going Mad, Or Another Whos Life Is Hanging By A String?
While Im Banging My Head, Up Against The Wall, Fighting My Own Demons?
Feeling My Own Pain, While hearing the suffering of others?
Is Earth The True Hell? Lost Souls Looking For Solid Ground?
If Life Is This Grand Stage, Can We Change Our Roles?
Or Do We Have To Keep Fighting This Battle Of Hate?
Thrown Behind Enemy Lines Day After Day!
Are You Training Us To Make Us Stronger?
So When We Scream In The Night, We Can Comfort One Another?
Dear God! Im Sorry If It Looks As If Im Calling You Out!
Im Not- Its In You I Trust!
Dear God, I Know You Love! Please Show Us The Way To Universal Peace.
For Brothers And Sisters, In Your Eyes We Are, For Eternity!
. BY: C.S. BOATMAN 05/27/2005