This is a poem that I wrote some time ago, which I ended up turning into a song. Guess what it's about ? :) I'd really like some input.
Inside of me, there's a burning - a feeling that I can't control. A dire need to be inside you - to be caressing your inner soul. I smell the scent of your body - it's drawing me like a guiding light. Initiates my anxiety - Forcing my face out of sight!
What else can I do? Now that I'm a prisoner of satisfying you. What should I propose? I turn my head to smile and kiss the rose.
Subtle moans, tender expressions - illusions of a sweet surprise. I kiss your lips, your body quivers - I gaze up and look into your eyes. The candlelight casts a reflection - a shadow of the things to come. I crush your will, with just one finger - I will not stop until you have succumbed.
What else can I say? I've sowed the garden; now I want to play. There's no sense to oppose. Lie back and relax as I kiss the rose.
What else can I say? - The beauty of your flower just takes my breath away! Your tenderness exposed - I bow my head again and kiss the rose!
The fire fades at your completion - Your satisfaction is upon my face. The rose has bloomed out of the garden - leaving you with an empty space. The morning dew is all around me - mingled with the bedtime mist. Exposing all of your contentment - Revealing all of your hidden bliss.
There's nothing left to say. I will not pluck your flower then walk away! As spring comes to a close - winter, summer, Fall I'll kiss the rose!
