I lay in this vast place
Thinking of details
The parts he never thinks I remember
The flowers that grew in the cracks
The blue color of that plastic pale
The red on that hidden coffin
And as the scatted detailed moments
Start to slip into the anger of misscommunication
He thinks only of loss
And
I sway in this detailed moment
Of the city by water
And the joy he's forgotten
Thinking of details
The parts he never thinks I remember
The flowers that grew in the cracks
The blue color of that plastic pale
The red on that hidden coffin
And as the scatted detailed moments
Start to slip into the anger of misscommunication
He thinks only of loss
And
I sway in this detailed moment
Of the city by water
And the joy he's forgotten
Your writing is so vivid. It's like someone has put a memory in my head.