paolodesade

what are the differences in your dream? you're a boy for reals and it's reoccuring... what else?

I'd say add more spacing to the ad - just to make it stand out more. And use fewer words. The gist should come across in the first sentence. Then a line break. And then launch into pricing & jobs. Then another line break. And then something about you. Line break and then your contact info. I figure you can switch them around as you see fit but really spacing and short sentences do wonders! Good luck!

I think I want to be a pastry chef and/or a gardener when I get a bit older. Me - grow up - what?