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oneimill

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SCRIPT IS DONE!!!!

Oct 6, 2014
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Well, the first draft anyway.

I'm looking for a few people to read it, and give me some feedback. If you're interested, let me know.

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almost_missed:
Would love to help proofread but I don't think I'm any good at that hahaha
Oct 6, 2014
oneimill:
@almost_missed I'm really just looking for feedback on things like the pacing, plotting, any plot holes, characters. Things like that.
Oct 7, 2014

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