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Tuesday Oct 11, 2005

Oct 11, 2005
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All right
I rarely write out of passion
but here goes so it will probably suck


When truth be told
And your love is unwrapped
Who will you turn to
The essence of your delusions
Laid out before you
The passion you longed for
Besmirched by reckless abandoment
Who will you turn to
Shall it be me love
Left behind in your adventures
Thought to be a simple thing
But the one you seem to trust
Will I be waiting in the throngs
Like the love starved child
Culled cruelly from your breast
Will I be the spurned and unrepentent
Turning my back to you
Laughing at the crocodile tears
Who is to say love
I just hope you find what you seek
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lone_figure:
Wise Master of the Words,

I submit to you another poem via my page.

CAtch ya later

p.s. Excellent poetry (as usual): you got the metaphors sweet!
Oct 14, 2005
lone_figure:
Thanks for the compliment about my poem! (Coming from you it means a LOT smile )
Oct 14, 2005

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