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Saturday Sep 04, 2004

Sep 4, 2004
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another soft and sappy love poem, I have some great sniper stuff, I just wrote, but can't put it on line, since it must be orginal when published and it's coming out in nov in a few differnt journals and reviews

so here is another rough draft


Dizzy

A lone star shining
On a three quarter moon
Faintly behind it - soft stars - dizzying me
Almost as they are her orchestra

Full of energy - Radiant
She warms my soul,
When I seem, light years away
Or inches apart

Bursting with power and energy
As the purest beauty accompanies me
A perfect night
Tanglewood in its full glory

A gentle wind hums
The melodies of love
With a swift, but slow comforting pace
Romance fills the mid summers air

Lovers hold hands
And express themselves with a smile
Hearts beat as one
To the rhythm of the Symphony

Time stands still
Then with great sorrow
This magical moments passes
But will never fade from my memoir
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falias:
you have sweet writing kiss
and i have really cool glasses kiss

[Edited on Sep 09, 2004 11:52AM]
Sep 9, 2004
beautiful_hatred:
nice, very nice
Sep 9, 2004

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