I read this in verbal communications this morning.I wrote it on the way in and Prof. Mesa let me read it.It's not as "good" as I would like but not bad for on the fly.See what you can do with an hour train ride to school?!?
*Ahem*
I got on the 3 train this morning
and saw a vision.At least that's what it seemed like to me.I was minding my own business,when our eyes met.So,I like Rakim said;"I was watching you watching me." She gave me a quick smile and time slooooowed!
I had a vision of her replaying the first and perfect love in Creation.You know deep down what I'm talking about? That first time Eve leaned over and gave Adam a kiss on his forehead.No words needed,just pure emotion.The only two on the planet.Just knowing she's flesh of his flesh and bone of his bone.NO man has ever been as sincere since.NO man.That love that salutes the divinity in you that acknowledges the divinity in me.
I sat there and performed a trillion computations in my head.Each flutter of her eyelashes wrote another scripture in the pages of eternity.I caught the Holy Ghost and had to give praise.You know,just like Adam. You knooooow the first time she walked outta the morning mist,Brother looked over his right shoulder and said;"Daaaaaaaamn God,You do gooood work!"
I sat there and memorized the texture of her hair,her complexion,the color of her eyes.THe fullness of her lips made me think of fruit.Sweet succulent summer fruit.The shape of her neck to that little crevice where a single bead of sweat would collect before we made love.
But then she got off at Borough Hall,
and I forgot to say hello......
Got an A+ BTW!
*Ahem*
I got on the 3 train this morning
and saw a vision.At least that's what it seemed like to me.I was minding my own business,when our eyes met.So,I like Rakim said;"I was watching you watching me." She gave me a quick smile and time slooooowed!
I had a vision of her replaying the first and perfect love in Creation.You know deep down what I'm talking about? That first time Eve leaned over and gave Adam a kiss on his forehead.No words needed,just pure emotion.The only two on the planet.Just knowing she's flesh of his flesh and bone of his bone.NO man has ever been as sincere since.NO man.That love that salutes the divinity in you that acknowledges the divinity in me.
I sat there and performed a trillion computations in my head.Each flutter of her eyelashes wrote another scripture in the pages of eternity.I caught the Holy Ghost and had to give praise.You know,just like Adam. You knooooow the first time she walked outta the morning mist,Brother looked over his right shoulder and said;"Daaaaaaaamn God,You do gooood work!"
I sat there and memorized the texture of her hair,her complexion,the color of her eyes.THe fullness of her lips made me think of fruit.Sweet succulent summer fruit.The shape of her neck to that little crevice where a single bead of sweat would collect before we made love.
But then she got off at Borough Hall,
and I forgot to say hello......
Got an A+ BTW!



VIEW 9 of 9 COMMENTS
I was away for a few days. But I just got back and getting back to you now.
Anyway, that little story was rockin'! Is it based on reality at all? I see why you got an A+. By the way, what are you studying?