mordimius

you looked at me that night you said you wanted it all to end but you forgot I tall ended for me long ago I told you I could help but that would mean you loose everyone you held dear your friends could never see you again I told you to think about it you said you knew that moment you wanted my gift as I "kissed" your neck I felt your heartbeat race and then it stopped I stopped and looked in to your eyes and said now I have you finally. As held you in my arms I knew soon I would have to let you go for you would turn on me. I called in a servant for the chamber across the hall. As she entered the room I felt you turn I sat you up towards her you jumped after her with such grace and elegance. I could have sworn you were an angel tainted by my hand, I could not help but smirk I saw you wipe off the blood from your mouth. I threw clothes for you to put on you made your mind and now I must teach what this life is like. As we walk down that street I asked if the world seemed different even though I already knew the answer . You looked at the cold street with crimson eyes I saw you rub them for it was the first time you actually saw the world for what it truly is dead. You exclaimed that you felt whole again I smiled and said wait my dear it has just begun.
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