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Noemi

I.

she might be candy
I must find out
if she is
as purposeful as that walk
that self-confident strut
as pensive as
that lip-biting thing
she does

kissing her
must be
like eating music

II.

Several friends and I were standing in a parking garage around this car she was in, looking at her. She just sat in there and started talking, but we couldnt hear because all the windows were shut. I tried to make a joke out of it by moving my lips without speaking but nobody laughed. Finally she got out and started acting like she was leaving or going somewhere. She said goodbye to everybody, then turned to me and smiled. She poked me gently in the stomach with something like a cane or an umbrella and said, Goodbye, you big guy.
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cobalt:
Thanks once again for your further comments in the Poetry Kicks Ass group...in particular thanks for reading the works closely enough to offfer a critique! I will take another look at the pieces with your comments in mind. I hit the link for your web site and it's very nice - very clean! Good luck on the job hunt!

[Edited on Mar 16, 2003]
Mar 16, 2003
stickyrice:
Thanks for the book tip! Many years ago, I read "Lucid Dreams" by Celia Green and was amazed at the prospect of having them deliberately. Once in a while I can do it.

Good luck with your work. I appreciated reading it here.
Mar 17, 2003

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