I want honest opinions. No mocking, please.
These are just scribblings. I don't know where they're going, I just wanted to play with words.
Here's what I've written:
When we are little, we are told that we should work together. We are told that everyone is equal and that sharing is caring. The answers to things are simple, matters of black and white and never shades of grey. If someone pushes you down on the playground, theyre sent to the corner to think about what they did. Two plus two is always four and there are never any remainders or unsolvable equations.
We grow up with euphemisms. We grow up with lemonade made from the lemons we receive. We grow up with crumbled cookies and flies caught with honey, not vinegar. Our glasses are usually half full, but if they spill, there would be no use crying over them.
The second paragraph isn't really done.
These are just scribblings. I don't know where they're going, I just wanted to play with words.
Here's what I've written:
When we are little, we are told that we should work together. We are told that everyone is equal and that sharing is caring. The answers to things are simple, matters of black and white and never shades of grey. If someone pushes you down on the playground, theyre sent to the corner to think about what they did. Two plus two is always four and there are never any remainders or unsolvable equations.
We grow up with euphemisms. We grow up with lemonade made from the lemons we receive. We grow up with crumbled cookies and flies caught with honey, not vinegar. Our glasses are usually half full, but if they spill, there would be no use crying over them.
The second paragraph isn't really done.
don't know what i like about it...i just do
that is probably no help or intrest to you whatsoever, but i thought i'd tell you anyway
"We grow up with lemonade made from the lemons we receive"
it suggests something about how kids get the same sour fruits as adults do, yet somehow adults have forgotton how to make lemonade.
Decided what it's going to become yet?