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Atlas Collapsed

Jun 9, 2015
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This is one of the most emotional, and revealing poem that I've written. It expresses a multitude of emotions towards religion, and the way the death and discovery of my father has impacted it.




Let's face it

You fake it

If you were real I'd be in a casket, I mean I've asked it

And ya know, they always said you'd answer any prayer,

but when I used to come to you you'd act like you didn't care

From my eyes, you just weren't there

And I've screamed from the bottom of my heart

What a heavenly father you are

And speaking of fathers- why couldn't you alter your plan

And allow mine to see me and mines become a man

And sometimes I don't even know that I am

When I get lost in my thoughts I start choking again, crying within

Tears well up in preteen eyes, I'm always reverted back to my preteen mind

And now that I'm grown, this burden has taken it's toll

Hell, I'll take anything sold

But no matter the dose, I can always remember that his skin was so cold

Every decision I made was to get away from your game

And if you appeared on this plane, I'd probably take aim

I'd burn in hell just to distance myself from your name

And once I've claimed that domain

I'll rise from the flame

To purge the Earth of your faith

Peace without religion or god

I know Jesus is a facade

So I let out a roar

The roar of a lion

Glaring into the eyes of your Zion

You once gave me something to rely on:

The promise of your Kingdom

But I thought for myself

And I thought to myself

Would this world be a burning land

If it was held in his cooling hands

Then Atlas collapsed

Atlas collapsed

And if my wicked words are wrong, my mind ain't changing

Because a god who lets his world get like this sounds a lot more like Satan

Why'd you let your own creation get into such a bad situation

Where there's nothing but hatred

Power and greed, there's nothing left, its up to us to succeed

But human being just can't fucking agree

So when do you plan to intervene?

Then comes the problem of which god we will see

I mean who could it be?

Show me which one isn't mythology

I let out a roar

The roar of a lion

Glaring into the eyes of your Zion

You once gave me something to rely on:

The promise of your Kingdom

But I thought for myself

And I thought to myself

Would this world be a burning land

If it was held in his cooling hands

Then Atlas collapsed

Atlas collapsed

Who knows, maybe someday Earth will be one

I could live in a place where I'd want to bring up a son

But for now I'm thinking I should pack up and run

Because Atlas is shaking under the pressure we're making

I'm guessing you ain't even coming to save us

If you ask me, we could use something gracious

Before humanity gives up, to watch nature erase us

I kind of feel like society has gone complacent

'Cuz every single day we see more blood on the pavement

This violence is something that they can't get away with

So where the fuck is your saving grace?

I'm getting pretty sick of the wait

And the longer it takes, the more I hate

My body shakes, and I can't see straight

But I can feel his knees buckle under our weight

Atlas collapsed

Atlas collapsed

And we've got so many different religions

Humans just can't make the decisions

I wish we'd all take a step back and see its just superstition

I refuse to pray, but I'll keep on wishin'

There was a veil to be lifted that could clear our vision

But I'll never be silent

Just in case something'll listen

I let out a roar

The roar of a lion

Glaring into the eyes of your Zion

You once gave me something to rely on:

The promise of your Kingdom

But Atlas collapsed

Atlas collapsed

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