the latest thing i have written
i wrote it based on a conversation with this girl i know she is really sweet
and let's not forget pretty
she is an image whore lol
but she knows to keep it real with me
or i don't talk to her for days
it is funny how people can be really smart but act dumb to be accepted...
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i wrote it based on a conversation with this girl i know she is really sweet
and let's not forget pretty
she is an image whore lol
but she knows to keep it real with me
or i don't talk to her for days
it is funny how people can be really smart but act dumb to be accepted...
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lunna:
I love it hon. Very visually appealing throgh your words. I am glad we got to talk this morning a bit. Take care!
lunna:
Thanks hon!
WELL sadly the princess
has a new title soooooo
i guess i will send the old off in the right style
i used to write lyrics alot for this band i was in well sadly it was not the kind of lyrics i wanted to write
but i did get the feel for writing them
this poem is directly for the princess formerly known as...
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has a new title soooooo
i guess i will send the old off in the right style
i used to write lyrics alot for this band i was in well sadly it was not the kind of lyrics i wanted to write
but i did get the feel for writing them
this poem is directly for the princess formerly known as...
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lunna:
You are the biggest sweetheart! Wow, I feel so honored with what a wonderful writer you are that you decided to write something about me, for me. I have been down lately and this cheered me up so much. Thank You hon.
lunna:
BTW_ If you do any art work and feel like sending it my way let me know hon and thank you!!!!
well yet another for the (sweetest girl in the know universe) princess lunna
i call it trust
When all else fails you
Ill be there
When the world
Seems like an island
With a raging storm
All around it
With waves that beat
Upon your head
And threaten
To starve the life out of you
I will hand you my spark
And I will give...
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i call it trust
When all else fails you
Ill be there
When the world
Seems like an island
With a raging storm
All around it
With waves that beat
Upon your head
And threaten
To starve the life out of you
I will hand you my spark
And I will give...
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yuriel:
Wow intense... cute even
... ps you know yer in need of sleep when you mistake someone whos handle begins with m for another whose begins with p... and then proceed to tell them good luck with their future and their kids and such... ps being a good writer rocks
Someday I might actually be worth a damn at something too haha.... well if I can motivate myself/get the inspiration...

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[Edited on Feb 16, 2004 8:53AM]
lunna:
Hello, I changed my name. 
this be my valintines entry
much love to the world this day
at least i hope it all goes that way
well anyway as i lay there doing my best to sleep
what should rise from the depths of
my restless sleep
but an image that made me bounce
out of my bed forgetting what time i had to be at work
and set me...
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much love to the world this day
at least i hope it all goes that way
well anyway as i lay there doing my best to sleep
what should rise from the depths of
my restless sleep
but an image that made me bounce
out of my bed forgetting what time i had to be at work
and set me...
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yuriel:
i can always look forward to a day of yummy poetic entertainment huh? that and someones talent to envy highly
i like it man
ps we all know vday sucks the big one.
ps we all know vday sucks the big one.
this one is called
"THE BLUE ROOM"
The blue room
Of so long creeps into my mind
The blue room where I first held
That pale white raven
So sweet and innocent
Her white lace looked blue
She held on so tight
She smelled of flowers
Though it was her innocence
She was surrendering
There was no pain
Only the sweetest love
I surrendered all...
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"THE BLUE ROOM"
The blue room
Of so long creeps into my mind
The blue room where I first held
That pale white raven
So sweet and innocent
Her white lace looked blue
She held on so tight
She smelled of flowers
Though it was her innocence
She was surrendering
There was no pain
Only the sweetest love
I surrendered all...
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yuriel:
nice
ooooer.... the blue room... now WHY the FUCK does that ... wait no thats the white room im thinking of... or maybe the blue oyster or velvet or some shit haha. werd to yer motherfucker yo! rawk.
this one is called
"THE CHAINS THAT BIND ME "
Struggle and fight
I thrash this way and that
But still I remain trapped
Beneath the weight of these chains
I claw and I roar
But it brings no closer
To the skies I wish to soar
Here in what seemed like the end
Hope or heaven
This angel they send
To me
There is...
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"THE CHAINS THAT BIND ME "
Struggle and fight
I thrash this way and that
But still I remain trapped
Beneath the weight of these chains
I claw and I roar
But it brings no closer
To the skies I wish to soar
Here in what seemed like the end
Hope or heaven
This angel they send
To me
There is...
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lunna:
Pretty! I will email you soon about details on publishing as I had mentioned to you in chat before. Take care hon.
yuriel:
cool yo. so are you. ciao
well i guess i should update
so that princess lunna can have something new to read
i hope you like this one
it's called
"WATER"
Sitting in the water
Watching as the droplets fall from my face
As they touch the water
Each leaves a ripple
The ripples become like thoughts
Each ring conducing the ramblings
Inside of my head
The warmth of the water...
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so that princess lunna can have something new to read
i hope you like this one
it's called
"WATER"
Sitting in the water
Watching as the droplets fall from my face
As they touch the water
Each leaves a ripple
The ripples become like thoughts
Each ring conducing the ramblings
Inside of my head
The warmth of the water...
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lunna:
This is beautiful Mecha! Well, the bad news is that my roomate needs to use the puter so I don't think I'll get the chance to be online tonight cutie.
But I will be online tomorrow night,so just drop me a line in my journal of what time and put it in my time if you will be around tomorrow night to talk. Much love to you and wow..once again I am amazed at your writing.
yuriel:
cool writings yo.
this one is call sweetest friend
kissing her lips
Loving her frame
Whispering I love you
Then her name
Getting lost in the world
I see in her eyes
Enjoying so much her sweet surprise
Feeling time stop
When shes underneath
And I m on top
Her whimpers and moans
Fill my ears
I love her so much
My eyes fill with tears
I cherish...
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kissing her lips
Loving her frame
Whispering I love you
Then her name
Getting lost in the world
I see in her eyes
Enjoying so much her sweet surprise
Feeling time stop
When shes underneath
And I m on top
Her whimpers and moans
Fill my ears
I love her so much
My eyes fill with tears
I cherish...
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as i love making lunna happy
cause she is just the sweetest
yet another of my archived writings
that i think she might enjoy
i have not been putting the titles on them but i will start with this one
VELVET HANDS
Warm breath
Hot lips
Blood rushes through my veins
My mind goes crazy
Velvet hands
Searching for satin flesh
Beneath the gossamer night...
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cause she is just the sweetest
yet another of my archived writings
that i think she might enjoy
i have not been putting the titles on them but i will start with this one
VELVET HANDS
Warm breath
Hot lips
Blood rushes through my veins
My mind goes crazy
Velvet hands
Searching for satin flesh
Beneath the gossamer night...
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lunna:
I love the part about not being able to hear what she is saying because your heart is punding so loud. Wow, you are just such a great poet. Talk to you later cutie!
Well sweetest lunna
here is one i wrote a while back
i hope you like it
i also hope that you have checked out my page but if not i guess i can keep posting junk here just for you
She spoke her wish for me
Almost tears formed in her eyes
As she spoke
Her words caught in her throat
She spoke of this...
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here is one i wrote a while back
i hope you like it
i also hope that you have checked out my page but if not i guess i can keep posting junk here just for you
She spoke her wish for me
Almost tears formed in her eyes
As she spoke
Her words caught in her throat
She spoke of this...
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mecha:
oh ok there have been many things said about that poem and sweet was just never one of them
depressing is the most common lol
depressing is the most common lol
lunna:
I am in love with your writing..all of it is so wonderful! Talk to you later cutie!