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Thursday Apr 26, 2007

Apr 26, 2007
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Now I can not only write shitty poetry in English, but also in German. I'm not sure if I should be happy about this. I just know that I had to do it for the worst class in the world.

It's meant to be about the parallels between the fall of man (from the garden of eden) and the fall of man from the trees through evolution. Either way, I'm going with the theory that that chapter of the bible is a metaphor for societies switching to a huge domestic agriculture market.

psha:

Someone should let me know of the errors that I've made so that they can be fixed!

Von Affen zu Menschen

In diesem Zimmer steht ein Mensch in seiner lezten Stunde
und seine Augen folgen
der Pendeluhr
an dem Mauer.

Er hat auf diesem Zeitereignis schon gewartet, seitdem
er aus den Lften hinfiel -
Von den Bumen
wie die Frchte.

Er hat die Sorten angepflanzt, ach, deren roten Wurzeln
die Menschen fast zerschnitt. Er
schuf die Wege
zum Krieg und lief.

Er hat die schdliche Kraft von den Gtter gestohlen
und wird von ihrer Kraft jetzt
bald umgebracht.
Ist es umsonst?

Hier liegt ein armer Mensch, der nicht von seiner Nachgeburt der
Erbsnde sauber ist. Und
es gibt jetzt nur
das Dickicht der
Stdte.
VIEW 4 of 4 COMMENTS
chazstrummer:
I'm sure it's good. smile
Apr 26, 2007
painunbound:
Lol, that's funny now you're like the Rammstein of the poetry world.
Apr 26, 2007

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