Taxi. Driver smiling. I'm in the passenger seat, smiling too. Buildings on my right. Buildings on his left. Driver talking. Me, I'm talking too. Sunset postponed. Not a word he says making sense. Not to me. Taxi stops. Driver smiles. Fare paid by me, no longer in the passenger seat, standing on the sidewalk.
Taxi is no more. Taxi gone.
Feet walking. Shoes shining. Thoughts arguing. Face changing. People passing. Me within me. Who am I, if not seen? People talking as they pass. Me whistling as I go. Walking alone in the snow.
Door between me and the world. Door opens. Hello world. World wishes you welcome. Me within me in a world of new opportunities. Mind the gap. Green walls. Dark ceiling. A stairway to another floor. Climbing. Tripping. Falling. Landing. Eyes are open. Where am I, if I can't see?
People laughing as they crouch to touch my face.
Crisp sounds in a walkman. Tape deck out of date. Tape cover smashed. Batteries low.
End of entry.
Taxi is no more. Taxi gone.
Feet walking. Shoes shining. Thoughts arguing. Face changing. People passing. Me within me. Who am I, if not seen? People talking as they pass. Me whistling as I go. Walking alone in the snow.
Door between me and the world. Door opens. Hello world. World wishes you welcome. Me within me in a world of new opportunities. Mind the gap. Green walls. Dark ceiling. A stairway to another floor. Climbing. Tripping. Falling. Landing. Eyes are open. Where am I, if I can't see?
People laughing as they crouch to touch my face.
Crisp sounds in a walkman. Tape deck out of date. Tape cover smashed. Batteries low.
End of entry.
VIEW 20 of 20 COMMENTS
and it puts you right there with you..
youre entries can be really clever
when's your next set, hottie?
edited to add: You should update more often.
[Edited on Jan 31, 2005 9:16PM]