Better:
An incestuous muse
breeds my darkness
lonliness carves out my destiny
while razor bladed paintings
etch my souls' desire
ultimate freedom
word for word
like worms in my ears
she eats my thoughts before they become real
inspiration sparked from hunger
this burning passion invites creation
only me only we
my own little....dream perhaps
please tell me the truth...is my beauty a disgrace?
stealing...
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An incestuous muse
breeds my darkness
lonliness carves out my destiny
while razor bladed paintings
etch my souls' desire
ultimate freedom
word for word
like worms in my ears
she eats my thoughts before they become real
inspiration sparked from hunger
this burning passion invites creation
only me only we
my own little....dream perhaps
please tell me the truth...is my beauty a disgrace?
stealing...
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thegooddoctor:
that one is very interesting to me. Kinda the way i feel when i am drunk, but maybe i shouldnt have said that aloud
thawtz:
another work of art.....i bet this would mean something different to each one who reads it. I love it!
RED:
the sunset embraces this moment
as my breath heaves with passionate words
your hands trace my being
while my soul yearns for more
my eyes bleed tears of lust
as my throat runs dry from whispers of ecstacy
please let this last.....forever.
the sunset embraces this moment
as my breath heaves with passionate words
your hands trace my being
while my soul yearns for more
my eyes bleed tears of lust
as my throat runs dry from whispers of ecstacy
please let this last.....forever.
thegooddoctor:
Damn thats good.... 
thawtz:
Another great read from ya. Keep em' coming, gorgeous.
VELVET SHIRT:
let me vanish into your veins
as we sway to the pattern of the night
inhale the intoxicants that soak through my panties
as you take the liquor from my kiss
your passion poisons my womb
while the velvety night persuades the perversions of my past
these chains break with every thrust of you
humiliation leaks from my eyes
my naked exposure
captures...
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let me vanish into your veins
as we sway to the pattern of the night
inhale the intoxicants that soak through my panties
as you take the liquor from my kiss
your passion poisons my womb
while the velvety night persuades the perversions of my past
these chains break with every thrust of you
humiliation leaks from my eyes
my naked exposure
captures...
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thawtz:
Wow. I absolutely love it! That definitely got the blood flowing. That amazes me when a poem can do that. More! More!
endquire:
That is a very interesting. It reminds me of something. I have to think about that.
I guess that I'm just used to other sites like myspace or xanga, because with this site I'm confused as fuck! I can't load any pics, they're to big and I don't know how to re-size them, what are threads, and what is a "wish list" and where do I find it?! I feel lost and stupid. If anyone could offer advise or support, please...
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thawtz:
Try resizing your pics how I mentioned it in the last email I sent ya. As for threads...that's just nerd lingo for 'discussion topic.' Under 'Groups' and 'Boards', on this site, you'll find tons of groups with interesting threads. There's one for poetry junkies like us! As for a wish list, I think you can go to amazon or a site like that and create one. I'll try it and let you know.
stompbox:
The "Latest Friends Thread" thing took me a while to figure out and I'm still not sure I get it completely, but I think it's just like a little discussion topic that only people in the starter's friends list can see.
Then there's the Boards, which are public areas where you can read and create discussions that anybody can see. And you can also join Groups, and see discusions for a more specific topic.
Feel free to ask if you have specific questions. Welcome to SG!
Then there's the Boards, which are public areas where you can read and create discussions that anybody can see. And you can also join Groups, and see discusions for a more specific topic.
Feel free to ask if you have specific questions. Welcome to SG!
Burn:
perfumed by fear
failing to breathe
pounding
so loud so loud
thoughts weighing heavy on my mind
excuses paint my life full of colors that burn my eyes
like fireflies
tainted truths flow in these veins
bleed me clean
i feel dirty
nitty gritty particles of perfection
forced down my throat
showering me in shame
pointing all the blame in the wrong direction
tears...
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perfumed by fear
failing to breathe
pounding
so loud so loud
thoughts weighing heavy on my mind
excuses paint my life full of colors that burn my eyes
like fireflies
tainted truths flow in these veins
bleed me clean
i feel dirty
nitty gritty particles of perfection
forced down my throat
showering me in shame
pointing all the blame in the wrong direction
tears...
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thawtz:
Wasteland
THE world is so tiresome.
You feel boxed in.
Can you get away?
Close your eyes and it will begin...
A cloudy, chilly day
You're walking along an unfamiliar road.
Feelings of unknown guilt and sadness,
seem to go on hold.
Around the next turn, you see me.
I look up from my writings and give you a smile,
without a word, you sit and stay for awhile.
With just a look, in each other's eyes...
we see and understand each other's pains and see each other's lies.
Another similar soul is found and you find yourself smiling.
Your eyes are forced open...
by the world's harsh sound.
The walls and pressure form all around.
But you remember when you closed your eyes.
That there is a place..
you can walk to and hide.
--O
THE world is so tiresome.
You feel boxed in.
Can you get away?
Close your eyes and it will begin...
A cloudy, chilly day
You're walking along an unfamiliar road.
Feelings of unknown guilt and sadness,
seem to go on hold.
Around the next turn, you see me.
I look up from my writings and give you a smile,
without a word, you sit and stay for awhile.
With just a look, in each other's eyes...
we see and understand each other's pains and see each other's lies.
Another similar soul is found and you find yourself smiling.
Your eyes are forced open...
by the world's harsh sound.
The walls and pressure form all around.
But you remember when you closed your eyes.
That there is a place..
you can walk to and hide.
--O
thawtz:
Glad you liked it and GOT it. I soooo know what you mean about folks not getting your poetry. I'll dig up some more later, k? I'm seriously happy you understand me.
My spouse should be home soon....that's the person I need to have that talk with.
My spouse should be home soon....that's the person I need to have that talk with.