MORNING REVELATION
She raises her head from the cloudlike comfort of her pillow. One foot and then the other feel the fibers of the cool carpet beneath them. Shuffling in a daze of awakening slumber she moves from room to room. The light pierces through the darkness as she slides the door open and steps outside. Crisp and cool in the morning air she senses everything around her. Birds sing their joyful tune while motors rumble preparing for the days beginning. In the distance a crow lets out its morning wail. Tall evergreens stand still, calm, and dark not yet touched by the suns rays. Pale blue sky gives way for the rising of the sun. Breathe deeply in, exhale and feel peace. A moment of clarity is upon her.
She raises her head from the cloudlike comfort of her pillow. One foot and then the other feel the fibers of the cool carpet beneath them. Shuffling in a daze of awakening slumber she moves from room to room. The light pierces through the darkness as she slides the door open and steps outside. Crisp and cool in the morning air she senses everything around her. Birds sing their joyful tune while motors rumble preparing for the days beginning. In the distance a crow lets out its morning wail. Tall evergreens stand still, calm, and dark not yet touched by the suns rays. Pale blue sky gives way for the rising of the sun. Breathe deeply in, exhale and feel peace. A moment of clarity is upon her.
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nikko120:
I don't always log on SG, but when I do, I never fail to visit your page 
Miss yah!
Miss yah!
danilinn:
I love when a moment is captured by so exponentially many more words than could be breathed in the moment itself. Lovely.