So I am lucky to have a fantastic English professor for my last ever English class ever in life. So I had a really nice concept for my second essay that she liked and even liked all the ideas however she felt it was basically one long paragraph and an intro. She is holding off on grading and giving me the night to revise it and return it to her. However i'm stuck because the essay is nice the way it is and separated into paragraphs. I'm reviewing the structure she wants and I have no idea where to start. Like at all. In my mind my only option is to basically rewrite the entire 5 page essay which I do not want to do! UGH!!!!
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