Sorry I have been so scarce lately. My life has been so crazy. My hubby comes home in just a lil over 30 days, and I have sever OCD. So it seems I can't get everything perfect enough. I am non stop. Lately I have been working on my poems to try to help keep me busy. Heres one I wrote at like 3:30 in the morning I would love to know what u guys think.
Insomniac Nightmare
I find myself once again laying awake with visions of you dancing in my head.
I toss and turn for the sweet release of sleep yet find none.
There is this helpless void swaying in my chest, this nothingness that I am unable to repress.
The salitude of my dark drapped room gives me no comfort, no gentle lullaby.
For I need you my sweet Love.
You're hot breath on my hair,soft arms to cuddle close, the smell of your salty skin, for you are
my lullaby, my sensual release from this insomniac nightmare.
You are my Love!
Insomniac Nightmare
I find myself once again laying awake with visions of you dancing in my head.
I toss and turn for the sweet release of sleep yet find none.
There is this helpless void swaying in my chest, this nothingness that I am unable to repress.
The salitude of my dark drapped room gives me no comfort, no gentle lullaby.
For I need you my sweet Love.
You're hot breath on my hair,soft arms to cuddle close, the smell of your salty skin, for you are
my lullaby, my sensual release from this insomniac nightmare.
You are my Love!
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You'll get through it; 30 days is a lot shorter than 30 years, right?
Love ♥ .
I thank you and your husband for the
sacrifise you both have made.
P.S. I like you're poem and how descriptive it is.
Best of luck...