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Friday Mar 11, 2005

Mar 11, 2005
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Bigfoot Thinks

When he is quite still
and the sun rises at the left,
falling on the right.

At night, driving, dark humps
by the road; live oaks and towns
built outside the light.

Still not convinced, debating
politics with a wildflower,
with crows in flight.

Beyond sundown,
beyond timber,
mostly out of sight.



rstones33:
I like that!

I think the third and fourth stanzas are particularly strong.
Mar 11, 2005
rstones33:
your use of rhyme was, in my opinion, the correct use of rhyme - it's there, the reader can sense it, it gives the poem momentum but does not overwhelm it in word games
Mar 11, 2005

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