That song was pretty lame. I have a hard time with lyrics that don't just seem corny.
I hate corny.
Yet I want to write a song that gypsy girl can sing.
What could be nicer than hearing your own words wafting about the room, sung in the high registers?
My Basic Problem
This is what I have observed. The poetry group that I go...
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I hate corny.
Yet I want to write a song that gypsy girl can sing.
What could be nicer than hearing your own words wafting about the room, sung in the high registers?
My Basic Problem
This is what I have observed. The poetry group that I go...
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I've been trying to write a song for gypsy girl to sing. So far, this is all I have managed.
I'm not completely satisifed with some of the lines, but I think you'll get the idea.
just a little pleasure as I pass
It's a long cold time when you pass it in your pain
and the slowest hour is one you live alone
so...
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I'm not completely satisifed with some of the lines, but I think you'll get the idea.
just a little pleasure as I pass
It's a long cold time when you pass it in your pain
and the slowest hour is one you live alone
so...
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lolablu:
Aww. My roomie just wrote a song for us to duet on.
johnsonboy:
it's about the lines
If you leave orange juice in the fridge too long it produces a mildly acoholic concoction not unpleasant to drink.
Or maybe I should say, If you leave it long enough.
Eventually, I shall cover the walls of my cave-like abode entirely with art I've been making lately. Then it will no longer be apparent that the place needs a paint job.
I'll stand on...
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Or maybe I should say, If you leave it long enough.
Eventually, I shall cover the walls of my cave-like abode entirely with art I've been making lately. Then it will no longer be apparent that the place needs a paint job.
I'll stand on...
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funkabella:
first off as usual i love the writings, 2ndly LOL florence nightengale am not i 
but such a lovely thought!
you rock, and i love your comments and reading your poems/experiences etc.
but such a lovely thought!
you rock, and i love your comments and reading your poems/experiences etc. I walk into the Cavern and it's this kid from school, the type who glom onto me, and think they are big shot writers.
I don't indulge them but they think I do, because they are oblivious.
So anyway we had a beer and then he got the bright idea to step outside and smoke a joint in the parking lot of the body shop...
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I don't indulge them but they think I do, because they are oblivious.
So anyway we had a beer and then he got the bright idea to step outside and smoke a joint in the parking lot of the body shop...
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lolablu:
Tiana really makes me feel like my idea of "freedom" is the world's idea of "craziness." I guess that sums up the problem.
But as for that annoying kid from your class: I'm working on a little something called the go-to-hell-wand. This seemingly innocent stick, in fact, causes whomever pisses you off to get sucked into hell until you leave the scene. That way you don't have to deal with the annoying person and he or she might learn a lesson.
But as for that annoying kid from your class: I'm working on a little something called the go-to-hell-wand. This seemingly innocent stick, in fact, causes whomever pisses you off to get sucked into hell until you leave the scene. That way you don't have to deal with the annoying person and he or she might learn a lesson.
johnsonboy:
ovarian effulgences
Your horoscope, courtesy Madame Krakanova
Aries (March 21-April 19) Recent butterfly migrations have caused unexpected outbursts of enthusiasm for creative projects. This may or may not be a good thing. Don't paint yourself into a corner.
Taurus (April 20-May 20) Are you lost, or just temporarily disoriented? Pay careful note to landmarks next time and it won't be so difficult to find your way home....
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Aries (March 21-April 19) Recent butterfly migrations have caused unexpected outbursts of enthusiasm for creative projects. This may or may not be a good thing. Don't paint yourself into a corner.
Taurus (April 20-May 20) Are you lost, or just temporarily disoriented? Pay careful note to landmarks next time and it won't be so difficult to find your way home....
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Addendum: No, I've never read either of those books, but they do sound like books I want to read. I usually read about 5-10 books at a time but lately I have shirked my other reading responsibilities because I've found myself nose-deep in Lolita... that book is to literature like a mound of hot fudge on vanilla ice cream is to food.
I'm going to do acid again tomorrow. Excited! Trying not to get addicted and don't think I am... however lately it has just been falling in my lap, and I'm young, so!
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I'm going to do acid again tomorrow. Excited! Trying not to get addicted and don't think I am... however lately it has just been falling in my lap, and I'm young, so!
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aeryn:
Sounds like you have my horoscope for the day: Just because you have all the time in the world doesn't mean you can waste it. Time has a way of leaking through the bottom of the bucket, if you know what I mean
I have some pork chops, onions, mushrooms and sour cream.
The one thing I'm lacking is lamps for the living room, which would add to my comfort.
Other than that, I'm ok.
Except I would like to share the pork chops with someone and have a long conversation about the Imagist movement.
The one thing I'm lacking is lamps for the living room, which would add to my comfort.
Other than that, I'm ok.
Except I would like to share the pork chops with someone and have a long conversation about the Imagist movement.
aeryn:
yum the porkchops sound wonderful. I need new lamps too. I know nothing about the Imagist movement- want to tell me?
Well I was going to go out tonight but thought better of it.
I had just sat down in the bookstore when eskimo girl walked in with her most recent boyfriend. He said hello and made me shake his hand and she just kind of grunted and sat down facing away from me.
You'd think we had never met.
She generally acts that way when...
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I had just sat down in the bookstore when eskimo girl walked in with her most recent boyfriend. He said hello and made me shake his hand and she just kind of grunted and sat down facing away from me.
You'd think we had never met.
She generally acts that way when...
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Sometimes, you think you've learned your lesson.
You have it all figured out
Then you see quite clearly that you didn't have it figured out at all.
So you incorporate that lesson and go out into the world.
Get hammered by it, and, like the rabbit you are, make a run for it.
Hole up somewhere and chew on it for a while.
Space out,...
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You have it all figured out
Then you see quite clearly that you didn't have it figured out at all.
So you incorporate that lesson and go out into the world.
Get hammered by it, and, like the rabbit you are, make a run for it.
Hole up somewhere and chew on it for a while.
Space out,...
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lolablu:
You, my friend, are the sweetest.
rosemarie:
Holy shit, that was amazing. You can write, my friend.
p.s. I also thought that what you wrote in my journal was funny. ..shallow water, eating prawns.
[Edited on Apr 09, 2005 8:58PM]
p.s. I also thought that what you wrote in my journal was funny. ..shallow water, eating prawns.
[Edited on Apr 09, 2005 8:58PM]
My life has suddenly become very amusing.
Gypsy girl came by yesterday, checked out my apartment and said "You need a woman." She's right of course but also quite practical.
Result: Tonight I have new curtains and a wood floor, whereas yesterday I had an ugy stained carpet and dingy curtains. It goes much farther than that
But last night, she took me out with...
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Gypsy girl came by yesterday, checked out my apartment and said "You need a woman." She's right of course but also quite practical.
Result: Tonight I have new curtains and a wood floor, whereas yesterday I had an ugy stained carpet and dingy curtains. It goes much farther than that
But last night, she took me out with...
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lolablu:
It's true that there's no sense in hating my brain. It's not going anywhere.
What a whirlwind of wonderfulness. I think that's great. You and Gypsy girl can work on your house until it reflects all the new positivity.
What a whirlwind of wonderfulness. I think that's great. You and Gypsy girl can work on your house until it reflects all the new positivity.
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I didn't know acid hits gained potency with age. Did you know psyllocibin was a fungus that plagued wheat farms back before, you know, health stepped in with the big gun called FDA? Might explain some of those "visions" prophets had in the Bible.
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Coyote
Over and over the beautiful edge
I'm about to learn the way in.
I know there is one.
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...one thing, I don't understand,
so many pretty women in Avalon
an i'm just one man.
"Avalon My Hometown"
The Mississippi John Hurt version.
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The rocks are especially attractive today. I mean the stones along the road.
And the ceanothus in its greasy pride,...
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Over and over the beautiful edge
I'm about to learn the way in.
I know there is one.
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...one thing, I don't understand,
so many pretty women in Avalon
an i'm just one man.
"Avalon My Hometown"
The Mississippi John Hurt version.
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The rocks are especially attractive today. I mean the stones along the road.
And the ceanothus in its greasy pride,...
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rstones33:
Hey:
I was reading through the poetry kicks ass group and I have to say you do a gerat job at giving advice - I'm sure the people contributing appreciate your considerate reading of their work.
I was reading through the poetry kicks ass group and I have to say you do a gerat job at giving advice - I'm sure the people contributing appreciate your considerate reading of their work.
xip:
HOW MUCH WERE YOU ON? (in reference to that LSD story you just related to me) I take enough to see shit and to "go places" but the "places" I go are more like stalled moments in time I get stuck in... but I've heard stories about people "going to other planets" and "talking with supreme beings", etc? Yeah I want to do THAT.
So far the most promising self-publish book I want to do is "Love: and other scary stories," which is a collection of love stories that are not really romantic or standard in the least. Original huh!
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So far the most promising self-publish book I want to do is "Love: and other scary stories," which is a collection of love stories that are not really romantic or standard in the least. Original huh!
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