I like to write short stories sometimes so last night i felt like writing one so I did its about a girl who decided to take her own life.. its not really finished i got some changes to make but I felt like putting it up anyway. Its called "Apparations of Love" and yes I did steal the last line from Jimmy eat world.
Its so hard to have to hear something so tragic as this. Just hearing it makes your skin crawl with disbelief. To think someone so full of life could end it with just one fatal slice. With in a matter of minutes there they are lying in a pool of their own blood. It only happened a few days ago I had seen her just that morning. I could tell something wasnt quite right. She just seemed a bit hollow that morning like she was there but a thousand miles away. I tried to ask what was the problem but all I got in return was a blank stare. I now know I should have tried to do more but at the time I just shrugged it off like she was just having one of those days. Later that day I was passing through town only to see her sitting all alone in the cool fall breeze. Seeing her sitting there with the dying leaves falling around her I almost could feel her torment in the air. I wanted to stop and see how she was doing but I must have just been to busy to check up on a friend. Later, after hours of trying to find all the answers for those questions that burned in her head the only one that seemed to make sense was the one that would change her life forever. What could have possibly brought someone to this. Someone so loving so giving and so caring could just end it all with an ordinary knife on what was far from an ordinary day. When she was found later that evening lying in her bathroom floor, her helpless face streaked in blood, she left only one last thought, one last feeling scribbled in blood on the mirror. "Even if your heart would listen, I doubt I could explain."
Its so hard to have to hear something so tragic as this. Just hearing it makes your skin crawl with disbelief. To think someone so full of life could end it with just one fatal slice. With in a matter of minutes there they are lying in a pool of their own blood. It only happened a few days ago I had seen her just that morning. I could tell something wasnt quite right. She just seemed a bit hollow that morning like she was there but a thousand miles away. I tried to ask what was the problem but all I got in return was a blank stare. I now know I should have tried to do more but at the time I just shrugged it off like she was just having one of those days. Later that day I was passing through town only to see her sitting all alone in the cool fall breeze. Seeing her sitting there with the dying leaves falling around her I almost could feel her torment in the air. I wanted to stop and see how she was doing but I must have just been to busy to check up on a friend. Later, after hours of trying to find all the answers for those questions that burned in her head the only one that seemed to make sense was the one that would change her life forever. What could have possibly brought someone to this. Someone so loving so giving and so caring could just end it all with an ordinary knife on what was far from an ordinary day. When she was found later that evening lying in her bathroom floor, her helpless face streaked in blood, she left only one last thought, one last feeling scribbled in blood on the mirror. "Even if your heart would listen, I doubt I could explain."
Tane
[Edited on Dec 12, 2003 3:03PM]