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paintedbat:
hey that's really good. Better then anything I could ever do
sybil:
i want a mohawk..
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If you ever read anything of mine, read this:

Lines Composed from within a suburban Steak and Shake
(a Punk considers the Romantics and Island Views.)

a prelude:
Wordsworth, words worth,
of the egotistical sublime
verse me in breaking free
from my ever shallow'd mind.


What my appearance must be,
to the patrons of this place so
white, and bleached clean.
With fresh shaved skin...
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americanidiot:
I think I forgot this in our conversation last night/very early today so here it is:

kiss kiss kiss kiss

[Edited on Mar 27, 2005 5:57AM]
dominanefret:
everytime I try to say "steak and shake" I end up saying "shake and bake" instead.

For some reason they don't have Steak and Shakes in the Mid Atlantic.

They have them north carolina down to florida, and again starting in ohio... but non in Virginia, DC, Maryland, ect. Odd.
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I'm not sure why I was worried about turning in my story, I knew I liked it but I was afraid I would get nit-picked because I write different than everyone else in class and because I can be very vocal and opinionated. But since only one person had a real problem with the story, this response turned out to be exemplary:

"Your work inspires...
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americanidiot:
i'll just grin and blush for now kiss
jenocide:
you seem like a really interesting guy, with a lot going on. i have enjoyed all your writing that you've posted here. too bad you live far away, i'd really like to meet you.
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attention ladies:
keep your bullshit, your lies, your false love and your weak minds to yourself. thanks a bunch.

I kept telling myself that time would change things. That people would grow as I grew older, that they would catch up.

And yet you all seem to be children.

fuck it, all i want is for someone that i respect to look at me like...
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godiva666:
Hey you know what?

attention men:
keep your bullshit, your lies, your false love and your weak minds to yourself. thanks a bunch.

I kept telling myself that time would change things. That people would grow as I grew older, that they would catch up.

And yet you all seem to be children.

fuck it, all i want is for someone that i respect to look at me like I matter, is that so much to fucking ask for?

It goes both ways hunny... and I guess I'll say what everyone's been telling me. Not everyone's like that. You'll find someone that doesn't jerk your chain, but I can't say when or where. Beyond that, I've got nothing.
I'm sorry this shit's going down for you. If I could make it better, I would.

Oh ya, this is the perfect quote and I thank you for it- I'm going to repost it on my journal because I need to make a point. Thanks a bunch darlin!


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suburban_relapse:
Can I copy this and put it in MY journal?


I'm feeling so bitter about my fellow females lately. You'd think because I am one that I'd be able to figure them out, but alas....
I am just sick af publicly bitching about it. It's starting to make me feel pathetic. Poor me, blah blah blah.....


I hope you feel better soon though, love. kiss
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That last post was a random file from my old back up disk, I haven't seen some of that stuff in years, so without further ado... some more of my old poetry (remember this stuff is atleast 3 years old)

poetry

It was the rhythm of her voice ,
not the meaning of the words

It was her breath on my neck
not her desire...
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Grrrrr everyone in westerns pair off so easily...if there is a woman in a movie she is only there for the lead to fall in love with. I wish life were that simple. Like walking into my Spanish class and seeing one girl, and knowing it was only a matter of time before we lived happily ever after Grrr...damn life for not being a western...
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paintedbat:
I wish I lived in a movie
meanwhile:
Take me away..too saaannn frraaannsssiisscccooo.haha
Quinne tells me that it is beautiful there. Someday...I will find out.
uh dude dont depend on the leading lady. the pretty girl always got game. haha you've always gotta be on your toes.
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I just got a phone call from an ex...
she said "I love you but I hate myself
and I ruin everything...
like I did with you,
the sex was really good though"

thank you heather.
thank you for calling and reminding me how ridiculously beautiful you are, how amazing you CAN be, and how great the sex was. and how we happy we actually...
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suburban_relapse:
Hmph. You're a glutton for punishment Jesse.

Now back to me! Why do you hate me? Cuz you should have been at that show with me? If so, then I hate you too! biggrin
Yeah we have known each other for a little while...how long has it been? kiss
sybil:
ah well, seems every girl that shares that name with me is sorta crazy.