my short story: deep down
once again, i finally got off my ass and finished rewriting "deep down." it's a good story. i wrote it back in high school, and then i rewrote it last semester for my fiction writing class. however, there were a few things that needed changing, and tonight i finally made the changes. finally.
i might write a whole big thing later about the meaning in this story and how much i hated my fiction writing class for totally not understanding this story (*cough* morons *cough*), but for now i'll just let you read it and hopefully you'll enjoy it.
once again, i finally got off my ass and finished rewriting "deep down." it's a good story. i wrote it back in high school, and then i rewrote it last semester for my fiction writing class. however, there were a few things that needed changing, and tonight i finally made the changes. finally.
i might write a whole big thing later about the meaning in this story and how much i hated my fiction writing class for totally not understanding this story (*cough* morons *cough*), but for now i'll just let you read it and hopefully you'll enjoy it.
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It seems to me that she was just seeing things in a differnt view. Still all the same things just saw them in a less ...ummmm...."happy" way. Like the thing with the high heals....I dont see any diff between heels and nails....both make you walk funny and likely hurt like hell.
The world is a toilet....and thats how she saw it.