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Friday Apr 14, 2006

Apr 14, 2006
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im done with my story "el bosque del demonio" for my writing class. it was longer than most other stories that were turned in. i think it was too long. sortalike my journal here.

SPOILERS! (Click to view)

so i left off where raquel draws the creepy picture she saw that was drawn by the chain smoker lady in the breakroom. it looked a demonic symbol or a face.

in summary, after that night, raquel went to work the next day and saw the weird lady in the breakroom smoking behind the door. raquel kept noticing the lady getting up from her chair and going behind the door to smoke. at one point raquel noticed that the lady was not behind the door yet there was smoke..and it was puffing. so raquel slowly and cautiously goes toward the door. she finally and sloooowly opens the creaking door, and behind it is a piece of paper with a cigarette dangling in the middle of it. raquel looks at the paper and there's a sketch of the Devil's face. she's horrified to see that the face looks like its smoking the cigarette. she gasps and runs out of the breakroom . she runs into the strange smoker lady, and she gives raquel a haunting look. then raquels runs out of the bakery and into the woods. then all hell breaks loose.

as it turns out, as the story goes on for 20 more pages, there's a demon in the darkest middle of the woods. it takes the form of a charred, zombified little 5 year old girl who died in a cabin fire. this thing is burnt black with pupil-less and bright white eyes, and it has a unhuman and demonic voice. the smoker lady is either witch that helps the demon or the demon itself in her form. the demons ends up killing raquels sisters and raquel confronts the burnt up demon girl. raquel can't defeat it so she figures out that the key is the witch. raquel goes out and finds the witch and kills (murders!? ) her. ultimately, the demon dies. but raquel ends up being accused for the murder of her sisters and 'witch'...anyways. its happy and filled with family fun and Easter joy.



the idea comes from my grandma. she's beyond devout and the hardest of the catholics. her world in the village Mexico is filled with witches that tap into Hell and Satans powers. holy water, prayer, and even the mere name of Jesus dissipate the evil. my grandma has strange creeds and sayings.

my favorite thing she says from time to time is: "Hell is not fire. Hell is blood. Hell is the horror of death. Hell is an everlasting world of the stench of decay, rot, and the undead." it sounds creepier in spanish.

you don't wanna be in grandma's hell, boyee.

VIEW 8 of 8 COMMENTS
shellymc:
Meg was pretty big in the 80's when Jennifer was still struggling to get into films.
then she went incognito.
The brain may be small... but it looks pretty realistic.
Apr 16, 2006
tuli:
Sounds like my grandma. smile
Apr 24, 2006

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